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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/4681d58bde6ba
section on Simultaneity Problem
major starfaring racers appear on average only once every 5 to 15 million years.
races

On the Technocalypse
began on the evening of Archimedes 5, 540 AT (January 5, 2509 CE)
Are Archimedes and January the same month?
Archimedes 5th is July 25th, while Jan 5th is Galileo 1st. I don't know which date is intended in this case.

I've fixed the other error; thanks!
Noticed Haliki Movarion is incorrectly categorized under Non-Ascended Sophonts. Movarion did indeed ascend.
Fixed.
(10-12-2015, 05:11 PM)stevebowers Wrote: [ -> ]Archimedes 5th is July 25th, while Jan 5th is Galileo 1st. I don't know which date is intended in this case.

I've fixed the other error; thanks!

Hrm. This is my mistake. I skimmed the Tranquility Calendar article, but obviously didn't read it closely enough. Just assumed that the months listed corresponded to the Gregorian months in a straight substitution (plus one).

I'll go in and fix it when I get a spare minute.

Todd
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/51091900523ad
an ancient cluster of stars located near the galactic north pole north pole known as NGC 1502

intertwine and this disentangle their respective antennae
then disentangle?
That's actually on this page
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/510a95630431e
and it's fixed - thanks!
Sorry for the muslink.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48028a7f74e6d
MEEC1 was only detected because of iys use of modulated signals in the radio band
its?

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f9ecc17d772
It became a matter of pride to be able to defend any rational or rational position in an argument
rational or irrational?

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c1cb2ca8f150
To this end he sent a squadron
and e risked losing some or all of his battleships
Is Tolomeo a he or an e?
Fixed; thanks!
On the "Silenus" article, the word "neighbouring" is misspelled. Same word is misspelled on the "BAESFTLA" article.