http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a13ee2483366
Wormhole Termini
Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated/slaved transapient AI system
probably should be replaced by something like
Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated non-conscious transapient AI system
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e7873ca8b42
Alexandria (Tichy 44-III)
the total capacity of the entire system is around 1036 bits,
should be
the total capacity of the entire system is around 10^36 bits,
or
the total capacity of the entire system is around 10[sup]36[/sup] bits,
Well, apparently not the latter, unless the bbcode interpreter can be enhanced.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49fe9e73e718a
Alexandria Clusters
Unwanted visitors are be deported.
should be
Unwanted visitors are deported.
information-gathering activities.Often this involves
should be
information-gathering activities. Often this involves
(space after period)
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46ae85c7693a8
Magic Toy Box
As the defencive barriers go down, the world is be open to the rest of the universe, and its magical inhabitants defenceless against plunder. Within a few decades or centuries (depending on how long it takes news to reach the nexus, the system is invaded by collectors and get-rich types who pillage the planet of any clarketech that can be carried off
should be
As the defensive barriers go down, the world becomes open to the rest of the universe, and its magical inhabitants are left defenseless against plunder. Within a few decades or centuries (depending on how long it takes the news to reach the nexus) the system is invaded by collectors and Clarkers who pillage the planet of any clarketech that can be carried off.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4bfe37c9056f6
Supersophonts
choose to have smaller muscles and/or muscles,
probably should be
choose to have smaller muscles and/or more efficient muscles,
the construction within the transmogrified sophont's new body a full set
should be
the construction within the transmogrified sophont's new body of a full set
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/487e62ce90624
SNARE (Siris Nanocyborg Ascension RegimEn)
for low-singularity (S1 to S3) ascensions
probably should be
for low-singularity (S1 to almost S3) ascensions
(My understanding is that full S3 requires the mass of a moon to support, so seems unlikely to be appropriate when maintaining an external humanoid shape as the article seems to suggest. Near the end it also says "someone with the SNARE package can jump from SI:0.8 to SI:2.99 in a few seconds" suggesting that a full S3 ascension is unlikely.)
the transcended beings who result is biased
should be
the transcended beings who result are biased
further nanocyborgize it's host
should be
further nanocyborgize its host