http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation
Frequent (mis)use of the acronym THRN instead of TRHN
They were strongly influence by the old transhumanist
should be
They were strongly influenced by the old transhumanist
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cd35531fb53
Negentropy Alliance
The article contains seemingly contradictory dates for its founding: 2465 AT and 2738 AT.
In the header, it says
Founded 2465 a.t.
but later in the body it says
quote:
Originally, the Alliance consisted only of five superficially very different worlds: Negentropy Prime, Ken Ferjik, Greylag, Daffy and Gegton. In 2738 a.t., following their linkage through wormholes, they established an alliance based on the distributed archailect network of the AI cluster that was to become the Just One.
The last-mentioned discrepancy need not be a real one; the Negentropy Alliance could have started on separate worlds, but only became a unified empire once wormholes were in place.
(09-04-2016, 10:42 AM)selden Wrote: [ -> ]http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation
Frequent (mis)use of the acronym THRN instead of TRHN
They were strongly influence by the old transhumanist
should be
They were strongly influenced by the old transhumanist
Fixed these and also several other instances of 'THRN' in other EG articles. Evidently an easy mistake to make...