http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/539b9e0167be6
Athenaeids
only provides 1 calories of useful energy
should be
only provides 1 calorie of useful energy
While Athenaeids mature into familiar, human-like form,
might be better as either
While Athenaeids mature into the familiar human-like form,
or
While Athenaeids mature into a human-like form,
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana,"
should be
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana II,"
since it links to the article on Fata Morgana II, not the one on Fata Morgana.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/53b3584f9faf6
Fata Morgana II
joined together by "dog bone" trusses*,
probably should be
joined together by "dog bone" trusses,
since there doesn't seem to be a later section of the article to which the asterisk might link
The final, rel Fata Morgana II design
should be
The final, real Fata Morgana II design
roleplaying to sooth and defuse social tensions
should be
roleplaying to soothe and defuse social tensions
In the EG article about
Clade Darwin http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47e9b998ec996 are missing some hyperlinks.
Zoeific Biopolity, Zoea, avatar, Known Net, sophont , sub-sophont , transapient, Vec, and some more.
Also there is a miswrite:
"Such forms may then grow, manufacture,
or or use other equipment".
The issues raised in posts #713-716 are all updated.
Thanks!
Todd