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(05-23-2017, 08:40 PM)Avengium Wrote: [ -> ]We should add Jade Chime Singers http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480278a1b5496
To Culture and Society under the section Xenosophonts?
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b177d3ef3b1
Done! But I do intend to rejig the Culture page at some point, as it is too similar to the Galactography page at the moment.
(05-23-2017, 09:57 PM)Avengium Wrote: [ -> ]The Caretakers Gods: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbca2e75287
Has a date that is incorrect. 4th August 2591 c.e. (622 a.t.) .
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-c...-converter
The calendar converter shows: August 4, 2591 AD -->  Archimedes 15, 623 AT .
Also, links can be added to the article of Caretaker Gods, and to Caretaker Seed: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4603283944951
And to Caretaker Protectorate: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/460327eb69339
Fixed; thanks!
of humans who chose to incorporate animal traits whereas sophoont splices are nonhuman and nonsophont http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45beac611ad40
sophont, not sophoont.

slander that is believed only be a few extremist nearbaseline factions using pseudo-scientific phylogenetic analysis
only by a few
The article Hiders can have more links inside the main text.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45bd1a9eb4a5c
For example: sophonts, superbrights, hyperturings, periphery, worldships, stargate nexus, Oort clouds, memetic, megacorps, madverts, Sephirotic, Archai.
Both fixed - thanks!
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48bdab3a92bad Early AI History and Development
This article don't have a date written on the "Text by M. Alan Kazlev, Ben Higginbottom, Anders Sandberg, John B and Ryan B
Initially published on . "

Also, can have more links.
My research tells me that this page was created on 15 March 2001. Fixed.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cfcc88d9410 Deeper Covenant .

. Their most developed systems will often include a microguage communication link and a number of the Network's stellar boost stations.
Typo: microguage > microgauge.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480d40a5d5d84
Fiat Caecus Lux

Only incidences of the disorder are well known and recorded in the entire history of the Terragen Sphere,
seems to be missing the actual number of incidents. If one counts only those described in the article, it should be
Only two incidences of the disorder are well known and recorded in the entire history of the Terragen Sphere,
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce422da8701 Sagittarius Transcultural Cooperation

Could have more links. For example: Version War , Sagittarius Sphere , hyperturings, Dominion, Negentropist and MPA, Inner Sphere, AI.