(06-02-2015, 06:41 AM)stevebowers Wrote: [ -> ]I've updated the New Gaia article somewhat-
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f7d26295d0f
and added a new image. Are there any other edits to the content that might be made?
Nice image. I'll put my article on the list for an an 'cleanup' edit, and if I have any content suggestions in that I'll mention them here. Anybody else who has suggestions, please float them here in the next couple of days too & I'll look to integrating those if there's agreement on them.
Nice image, Steve. Here are two more articles which need some tweaking:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc30971c3c5
Quote:For example A superior who takes up running will rapidly adapt to a level of cardiovascular fitness rivaling that of the best marathoner.
Here's a formatting error; I think that the newline after felinoid should be deleted:
Quote:felinoid
vertical pupils
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc2ccba05bf
Quote:only a fee for the the splicing was charged
Quote:A generation of superbabies were growing up into child entrepreneurs are forcing big changes
A formatting error involving a superfluous whitespace:
Quote:as generally attempted in mainstream efforts , weightlessness
Quote:especially the SMI²LEs
Is the following orange word really correct? Shouldn't it be
gengineered?
Quote:the GeneTEK faction had geneered their own deep-space subspecies
The Chameleon
Quote:The largest face is 2599 meters across, the smallest 2931 meters.
Should be switched around.
The
Interplanetary Age article references itself:
Quote:The Interplanetary Age had begun.
(It's an active link in the article.)
Yeah, that should probably be the Interplanetary Era. Amended.
Solsys
The 'more info here' link for the Asteroid Belt leads to the Mars article. It should lead
here instead.