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It would be more accurate to say the date is incorrect than 'inappropriate' which implies we are doing something wrong or shady.

Will see about fixing this when I get a spare moment if another Editor doesn't beat me to it.

Todd
Sorry,
I assumed that it correctly showed the most recent starting date of a term on the board.
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b27e35ae4
801 - Nova Terra: Erik Atell is killed in crossfire between between the

Earth is still a shambles

To this end they have believe they have GAIA
Also in the same article, there is what seems a contradiction:

610 - The remaining Martian ecosystem crashes. Great loss of life, although some refugees escape to surviving orbitals, others to the Belt or the outer solar system. >>>The swarm-ravaged Mars is occupied by Titanite invaders for the next four decades.<<<

But then

622- Refugees in orbit dissolve the Martian Union and establish the Martian Republic.
Still in the same article

621-660 - The Great Expulsion leads to massive emigration of Earth refugees

But then

640 - The expulsion ends, and GAIA dismantles her technological infrastructure and sets to truly restore the planet. The civilizations in space beyond near earth orbit are apparently ignored
Continuing

9th century - A group of about 20 ships form the Spaceman's League.
The pervasive danger and uncertainty that characterized the period eventual gave way to the stabilizing First Federation

https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/502d136b998e9
Struggling in the deps of arguably the greatest crisis that humanity had faced
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/502d136b998e9

The Martian planetary energy grid is must less extensive than that of Earth
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5017ed84be378