+- The Orion's Arm Universe Project Forums (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum)
+-- Forum: Offtopics and Extras; Other Cool Stuff (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=2)
+--- Forum: Suggestion Box - OA website (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=21)
+--- Thread: Proof-reading EG (/showthread.php?tid=678)
Pages:
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
11
12
13
14
15
16
17
18
19
20
21
22
23
24
25
26
27
28
29
30
31
32
33
34
35
36
37
38
39
40
41
42
43
44
45
46
47
48
49
50
51
52
53
54
55
56
57
58
59
60
61
62
63
64
65
66
67
68
69
70
71
72
73
74
75
76
77
78
79
80
81
82
83
84
85
86
87
88
89
90
91
92
93
94
95
96
97
98
99
100
101
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-05-2015
Quote:The Metasoft article also says that Dilmun is 2097 ly away, whilst Dilmun's article says it's 2101 ly away.This is probably a rounding error in Celestia. A bit large for an epochal adjustment.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-07-2015
I was just reading through the Current Era timeline - there are a few chronological errors in it, i.e. the Pas'utu'ril signal is discovered in 10532, but it's after an event in 10552.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-08-2015
Fixed (I think).
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-09-2015
Check out the page on the early First Federation. On the second line, there should be a space between "the" and "First Federation". ;p
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-10-2015
Fixed. I've seen a few of these recently - something to do with the link.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-10-2015
Similar issue on the page for the Internet War. May wanna check it out - "ormegacorps".
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-10-2015
Few more things I noticed:
Under "Xenoprovolve" - "theUtopia Sphere" - needs a space
This is just a suggestion - I feel that "Walking Mountains" should be under the Xenoprovolve page only, because they're of non-Terragen origin.
Also, Tiger Splices are under the Provolve page - I'm not sure why, because they're splices, as opposed to provolves.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 10-11-2015
All issues in Post #166 and 167 have now been fixed.
Todd
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-11-2015
Another thing I noticed today:
On the Gaian Type article, it seems that the PostGaian link actually links to the Bathypelagic subtype.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 10-12-2015
(10-11-2015, 09:13 PM)Centauri5921 Wrote: Another thing I noticed today:
On the Gaian Type article, it seems that the PostGaian link actually links to the Bathypelagic subtype.
Fixed. Thanks!