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RE: Proof-reading EG - tmazanec1 - 10-12-2015
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/4681d58bde6ba
section on Simultaneity Problem
major starfaring racers appear on average only once every 5 to 15 million years.
races
On the Technocalypse
began on the evening of Archimedes 5, 540 AT (January 5, 2509 CE)
Are Archimedes and January the same month?
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-12-2015
Archimedes 5th is July 25th, while Jan 5th is Galileo 1st. I don't know which date is intended in this case.
I've fixed the other error; thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-14-2015
Noticed Haliki Movarion is incorrectly categorized under Non-Ascended Sophonts. Movarion did indeed ascend.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-14-2015
Fixed.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 10-14-2015
(10-12-2015, 05:11 PM)stevebowers Wrote: Archimedes 5th is July 25th, while Jan 5th is Galileo 1st. I don't know which date is intended in this case.
I've fixed the other error; thanks!
Hrm. This is my mistake. I skimmed the Tranquility Calendar article, but obviously didn't read it closely enough. Just assumed that the months listed corresponded to the Gregorian months in a straight substitution (plus one).
I'll go in and fix it when I get a spare minute.
Todd
RE: Proof-reading EG - tmazanec1 - 10-15-2015
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/51091900523ad
an ancient cluster of stars located near the galactic north pole north pole known as NGC 1502
intertwine and this disentangle their respective antennae
then disentangle?
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-15-2015
That's actually on this page
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/510a95630431e
and it's fixed - thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - tmazanec1 - 10-15-2015
Sorry for the muslink.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48028a7f74e6d
MEEC1 was only detected because of iys use of modulated signals in the radio band
its?
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f9ecc17d772
It became a matter of pride to be able to defend any rational or rational position in an argument
rational or irrational?
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c1cb2ca8f150
To this end he sent a squadron
and e risked losing some or all of his battleships
Is Tolomeo a he or an e?
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-16-2015
Fixed; thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - Centauri5921 - 10-18-2015
On the "Silenus" article, the word "neighbouring" is misspelled. Same word is misspelled on the "BAESFTLA" article.