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RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 08-28-2016
(08-27-2016, 09:34 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b3bbdc13805I think that's Fendy's calculator; I've misplaced it at the moment, but I'm still in touch with him via Facebook - perhaps he has a newer version to upload.
Interstellar Trade
down at the very bottom, the link
http://eg.orionsarm.com/fm_store/RTTCalc.htm
Relativity Calculator
generates the error message
Server not found
Firefox can't find the server at eg.orionsarm.com.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 08-28-2016
Void Pocket, Void Swarm, Virds and Vats, Ship Design: Shielding all updated.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 08-28-2016
The link to the Relativity Calculator on this page is still working. You can probably replace the broken link using the working one.
Thanks!
Todd
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 08-28-2016
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464ce0b60796c
will attached itself to you
should be
will attach itself to you
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 08-28-2016
(08-28-2016, 08:24 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: The link to the Relativity Calculator on this page is still working. You can probably replace the broken link using the working one.Done; thanks!
Todd
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 08-28-2016
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4d1d3d7b2fbff
Laundry, The
they prefers to be buried
should be
they prefer to be buried
as well non-spherical forms
should be
as well as non-spherical forms
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 08-28-2016
(08-28-2016, 08:33 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464ce0b60796c
will attached itself to you
should be
will attach itself to you
Page amended- thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 08-29-2016
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4847348d6e46c
Known Net, The
icon may actually a spy program
should be
icon may actually be a spy program
That is why the Known Net was diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus, even if it was slowed for a while.
might be better as
That is why the Known Net has been only temporarily diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus. They have slowed the Net only for a while.
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 08-29-2016
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49c3de46a2d1d
God Web, The
who feared it may be used by Revisionist forces
should be
who feared it might be used by Revisionist forces
(past tense)
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 08-30-2016
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5453bc1f74965
Effector Frame
"Smart quotes" messing up: I see a white question-mark in a black diamond instead of an apostrophe or quotes.
a sophont�s torso
should be
a sophont's torso
the user�s DNI
should be
the user's DNI
provide yet more �hands� when required
should be
provide yet more "hands" when required