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RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 11-19-2016 I remember the Ousters; they aren't really all that much different from the Hiders or Backgrounders- the closest analog might be the Deeper Covenant. I'll just remove the reference. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 11-29-2016 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/484dcf19ae5c8 Collective Mind Societies critics to the collective mind model of the Amalgamation has also questioned\ should be critics to the collective mind model of the Amalgamation have also questioned the collective externally may appears to grow more diverse it internally tends to fairly quickly should be externally the collective may appear to grow more diverse internally it tends to fairly quickly RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 11-29-2016 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/481148c5462d9 Supporting Minds in the Red Star M'Pire computronium has allow these third toposophic should be computronium has allowed these third toposophic improve and expand the contacts Per developed among the fourth singularity beings should be improve and expand the contacts Per had developed among the fourth singularity beings RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 11-29-2016 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce3f35333da Red Star 'M'pire and consoling both during the process probably should be and counseling both during the process (although those who fail to achieve their goals doubtless need consoling, too.) a star with it's own Dyson node. should be a star with its own Dyson node. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 12-08-2016 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49123d408d6f2 Hellfire Expansion, The most of the pioneers origin from NoCoZo should be most of the pioneers originate from NoCoZo http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491232472b626 Tabridgen re-biosphere schemes fro those whose habs should be re-biosphere schemes for those whose habs RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 12-08-2016 Fixed; thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 12-08-2016 Hi, i think this article: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47a53c6e7b8a2 Transhuman needs hyperlinks. I suggest [[posthuman]], [[transhumanism]], [[ascend]] and [[memetics]]. Regards, Angel. RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 12-17-2016 Hi, i think i found a lapsus in this: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/573b16276c2ee EmotSpace Virchworlds "This has a few consequences, including that no two sophonts can ever have exactly the same emotional state in these four metrics," 6 emotions, 6 dimensions, not four. RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 12-28-2016 Both fixed; thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 01-11-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/483aec8a1fb1b Virtual Gardens "providing a outlet for baseline and near baseline creativity that has often become discouraged by interactions with higher topographic beings." Topographic -> toposophic. |