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RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 01-11-2017 Fixed. Thanks! Todd RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 01-15-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/587986523169c Shipyards and Spacecraft Repair Facilities and carry our minor repairs should be and carry out minor repairs RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 01-16-2017 (01-15-2017, 02:40 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/587986523169c Fixed. Thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 198 - Jean Beloit Sampson a third generation orbital tweak baby and one of the original Homo sapiens superior "vunderkinder", organises epic corporate coup and gains leadership of major orbital megacorp Solar Systems Development Corporation (SSDC) on Atlantis Habitat. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211 https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-samsung&biw=360&bih=264&ei=pwZ9WMiyEcHTjwSOkIa4Aw&q=what+does+vunderkinder+mean&oq=what+does+vunderkinder+mean&gs_l=mobile-gws-serp.3..0i13k1j0i13i30k1j0i8i13i30k1.1497.2125.0.3701.2.2.0.0.0.0.321.599.2-1j1.2.0....0...1c.1j4.64.mobile-gws-serp..0.2.596...41.uEXh30yLlUo wunderkind a person who achieves great success when relatively young. https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-samsung&biw=360&bih=559&q=what+does+wunderkind+mean&spell=1&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwjArNv4m8fRAhVhxYMKHTxmD80QBQgWKAA RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 Worst should be "worse". And if that weren't enough the ship's comm-links, already hampered by time delays and low bandwidth, were being selectively jammed so that any effort to win back their congregation only made things worst. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f92f7b152b9 RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 "By" needs to be included. Even though the Cishp relations with the other colonists were limited, as desired, they began feeling the pressures brought by the newer arrivals. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f92f7b152b9 RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 01-17-2017 Quote:198 - Jean Beloit Sampson a third generation orbital tweak baby and one of the original Homo sapiens superior "vunderkinder", organises epic corporate coup and gains leadership of major orbital megacorp Solar Systems Development Corporation (SSDC) on Atlantis Habitat.As explained elsewhere, I'll leave this one- it isn't a typo as such. Quote:Worst should be "worse".Both fixed; thanks. RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 In should be in. The powerful moderate Fusionist theocratic Clade Sea of Ch'i cooperated with Terran and Non-Aligned Orbital megacorporate interests to launch several vessels to Sigma Draconis in 414 AT. These later became the Penglai colony. In 470 a number of clades - mostly Atavist and heterodox Fusionist, launched a large colony ship towards Epsilon Eridani, and eleven years later In 491 the New Shoot clade Erotic Ascension embarked on the most ambitious mission of all, a quasi-generation ship, the Rabelais, which was to travel all the way to Iota Horologi. This, the only one of Jovian Quasi-Generationals to make a successful mission, established the Heket colony, later known as Frog's Head. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464e8caca8b42 RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 Sited should be cited Founded: 4116 a.t. is sited as the official founding date http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49fc14acd42b5 RE: Proof-reading EG - QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017 The word "them" should be included. At the same time maintenance costs for them were significant; not just in infrastructure but in teams of scientists and technicians to correct any problems in the hardware and software. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48bdab3a92bad |