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RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-04-2015
(03-03-2015, 11:32 PM)chris0033547 Wrote: The article on nanobots has a minor typo:
Quote:[..]have an internal power source can access external power such as light such as light or chemical fuels[..]
Fixed. Thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 03-08-2015
AreanTundral worlds
Quote:Stellar proximity(!) typically leaves these worlds quite frigid.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 03-08-2015
I think that John means 'the distance between the star and the planet'; proximity is not exactly wrong, but it is misleading. Fixed.
RE: Proof-reading EG - chris0033547 - 03-31-2015
There's a repeat of words in the following article:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d995c13c9e
Quote:[..]highly dense materials such as such as magmatter[..]
Should the following be fixed as well?
Quote:[..]evolve towards an Omega Point[..]
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 03-31-2015
Fixed and fixed. Thanks.
RE: Proof-reading EG - chris0033547 - 04-08-2015
The following article contains a repetition of words:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a140a5766bf7
Quote:[..]and generally is generally running at least 100 classes on various subjects every day.
A small typo:
Quote:The facility is maintained by subsapient vecs commonly known at "the staff".
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 04-08-2015
Fixed - thanks.
RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 04-20-2015
First Federation of Hu and AI, The
Quote:The assimilation of the countless millions descended from human refugees that in the Great Expulsion — some inhabiting the hulks of the old O'Neill orbitals, others in biospheres scattered throughout the solar system &mdash caused serious problems for the Federation.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 04-21-2015
Fixed - That's the dreaded encoding bug, usually caused by copy-and-paste from Microsoft Word.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Rynn - 04-23-2015
From the triangulum transmission page
Quote:While day-to-day decisions are made by the soophonts themselves