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RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017 (03-20-2017, 08:30 AM)Avengium Wrote: @matterplay , what do you think of merging pseudoclarktech into clarktech? My own preference is to go with separate articles, so that there are two different ways that a reader might encounter the material. However if someone wants to do up a rewrite of the clarketech article that mentions pseudoclarketech I'm all for it. RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017 (03-20-2017, 12:31 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- Siberoos Fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017 (03-20-2017, 12:33 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- Chilean Also fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017 (03-20-2017, 12:57 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Interplanetary age link goes to old Sundering article instead. Fixed. Thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017 (03-20-2017, 01:34 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- S4 Archailects Fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 03-21-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d9a409a10b S-Brain, Godstar popularly known as known as a Godstar should be popularly known as a Godstar It is not know to what toposophic level should be It is not known to what toposophic level the archai based upon them either willingly expire should be either the archai based upon them are willing to expire or the archai based upon them will willingly expire RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 03-21-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491aecf1478f9 Enigma Cluster, The (NGC 6755) several hundred relativist expeditions have arrived should be several hundred relativistic expeditions have arrived resist relativist travel within the cluster should be resist relativistic travel within the cluster RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 03-21-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/50bfb35472f7b Da'at disaster, The this ascension to had been a failure should be this ascension had been a failure RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 03-21-2017 (03-21-2017, 08:25 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491aecf1478f9 I think this refers to 'relativists' http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/519d9d29e4531 although the term 'relativistic' would work just as well, and is more general. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 03-21-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48474892bdb15 W-Brain, Distributed Wormhole Brain There's spurious line break in the middle of list element 2) between "is" and "guaranteed" |