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RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 04-23-2015 Fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - chris0033547 - 05-03-2015 Look at the main article about GAIA: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464d2a24c11ef Quote:with the exception of the sentent ecosphere of Kemmerer Quote:through her proxies &mash; brokered some lucrative tourism and visa quota deals RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 05-03-2015 Fixed; thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 05-13-2015 Morrow Quote:Tourists can now wander this deserted world in confidence, since the pathogen is extinct- but up-to-date ultratech precautions are firmly in place just in case… RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 05-13-2015 Fixed - thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 05-13-2015 Biotic Analogy Theories Quote:Because of their convenience and simplicity, they have a certain memetic attractiveness, and have become a subconscious metaphor in the minds of many modsophont individuals and cultures. Void Swarms Quote:Experts in the fields of toposophics and metric engineering have refuted these ideas as pure speculation and conjecture but the meme of mobile gods is still quite popular with more „esoteric" modsophonts. RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 05-13-2015 Fixed and fixed Thanks! Todd RE: Proof-reading EG - Cray - 05-14-2015 Because of writing in the Nieuw Amsterdam draft, the static orbital rings article has some out-of-date information on those rings: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/51f134d12d2bf Currently states: Quote:Over the centuries, these skyhooks developed into sizable orbital cities and were eventually joined into a continuous ring in 2753AT. The two rings provide a total of 5 million square kilometers of mixed urban and park lands that reached a stable population of 20 billion nearbaselines and other non-superbright bionts. It has been suggested that Nieuw Amsterdam was an inspiration for Metropolis Ring City, but Urban Cloudscapes consistently denied that the orderly, staid, angelnetted static orbital ring had anything to do with eir quixotic megastructure. Suggested replacement (vaguer to avoid conflicts): Quote:Over the centuries, these skyhooks developed into sizable orbital cities and were eventually joined into a continuous ring in 2753AT. It has been suggested that Nieuw Amsterdam was an inspiration for Metropolis Ring City, but Urban Cloudscapes has never given a clear answer on the matter. RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 05-15-2015 Edited; thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - CptnMus - 05-19-2015 Query, statesbeings, is this a typo or a new term? can't find a definition for it but it appears in the below locations: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48bdab3a92bad http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f733bcb2e00 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2c0170c310 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbd30e46c61 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce4e17cd0c6 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/4802a95fb92f2 From the number of occurrences I think it's legit and I can sort of infer what it means but for the guide I'm working on if the definition of statesbeing(s) could be added to http://www.orionsarm.com/page/294 Common Terms that would be awesome. |