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RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 03-30-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480ea7e345b24 Neuropsychism, Neurochauvinism Neuropsychism, sometimes known as neurochauvinism is a set should be Neuropsychism, sometimes known as neurochauvinism, is a set RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 04-11-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4b2e2a0099621 Aruan, Clade such as sibling the Aruan's sibling clade should be such as the Aruan's sibling clade RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 04-13-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/539b9e0167be6 Athenaeids only provides 1 calories of useful energy should be only provides 1 calorie of useful energy While Athenaeids mature into familiar, human-like form, might be better as either While Athenaeids mature into the familiar human-like form, or While Athenaeids mature into a human-like form, McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana," should be McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana II," since it links to the article on Fata Morgana II, not the one on Fata Morgana. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 04-13-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480fdadf8692f Redux Strategy, The exists somewhere Terragen civilization's future, should be exists somewhere in Terragen civilization's future, RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 04-13-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/53b3584f9faf6 Fata Morgana II joined together by "dog bone" trusses*, probably should be joined together by "dog bone" trusses, since there doesn't seem to be a later section of the article to which the asterisk might link The final, rel Fata Morgana II design should be The final, real Fata Morgana II design roleplaying to sooth and defuse social tensions should be roleplaying to soothe and defuse social tensions RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 04-16-2017 In the EG article about Clade Darwin http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47e9b998ec996 are missing some hyperlinks. Zoeific Biopolity, Zoea, avatar, Known Net, sophont , sub-sophont , transapient, Vec, and some more. Also there is a miswrite: "Such forms may then grow, manufacture, or or use other equipment". RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 04-17-2017 (03-30-2017, 05:13 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46d38510904a3 Fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 04-17-2017 (03-30-2017, 05:27 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480ea7e345b24 Fixed. RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 04-17-2017 (04-11-2017, 06:10 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4b2e2a0099621 Aaannd - Fixed RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 04-17-2017 The issues raised in posts #713-716 are all updated. Thanks! Todd |