Proof-reading EG - Printable Version +- The Orion's Arm Universe Project Forums (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum) +-- Forum: Offtopics and Extras; Other Cool Stuff (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=2) +--- Forum: Suggestion Box - OA website (https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?fid=21) +--- Thread: Proof-reading EG (/showthread.php?tid=678) Pages:
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RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 05-06-2017 Maybe it'd read better if you were to explicitly include all of the possibilities. My understanding is that all sizes of objects can be formed directly from the original gas cloud, and that sometimes the smaller objects are so small because they were prevented from becoming larger due to the winds from nearby proto-stellar objects blowing away the gasses and dust in their vicinity, causing them to be "starved" of material. Also, my impression is that bodies can form within planetary systems both by gravitational collapse and by accretion. It's all so complicated.... RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 05-08-2017 (04-30-2017, 09:33 PM)Avengium Wrote: The Sophic League article needs links. I've added quite a few. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 05-08-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/590fd3608f6c9 Incremental Omega Point Hypothesis converting their destination galaxy into computronium should be converting their destination galaxies into computronium RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 05-17-2017 Fixed - thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 05-18-2017 Metasoft http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cd30902bea3 should have more links to other articles. Also other major empires articles need links too. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 05-21-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/53a6cc7e2c0f4 Galrecon and would impact in thirsty-six standard days. should be and would impact in thirty six standard days. RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 05-21-2017 Ha! Fixed. Thanks! RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 05-23-2017 We should add Jade Chime Singers http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480278a1b5496 To Culture and Society under the section Xenosophonts? http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b177d3ef3b1 RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 05-23-2017 The Caretakers Gods: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbca2e75287 Has a date that is incorrect. 4th August 2591 c.e. (622 a.t.) . http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-calendar-converter The calendar converter shows: August 4, 2591 AD --> Archimedes 15, 623 AT . Also, links can be added to the article of Caretaker Gods, and to Caretaker Seed: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4603283944951 And to Caretaker Protectorate: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/460327eb69339 RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 05-24-2017 The article Chesed (Archailect) http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4625872300456 has a Typo. "Orinally the benign transapient" should be "Originally the benign transapient". |