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RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-16-2017 (06-15-2017, 06:26 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480d40a5d5d84Fixed; I've edited this article a little to update it as well. RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-16-2017 (06-16-2017, 06:17 AM)Avengium Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce422da8701 Sagittarius Transcultural CooperationDone. I've edited it slightly- the Dominion is presumably the Keter Dominion, rather than the Solar Dominion, and I've added the Sagittarius NoCoZo which seems to have been significant in this region but hasn't been mentioned yet. RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 06-16-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48fdb8829e239 Version War, The Quote:The Voyage of Admiral Tka Lett-Vorek — Myth and Reality The 7523 should be 4523. RE: Proof-reading EG - Rhea47 - 06-19-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49f6ffc730720 The monotech drive table has an error, it mentions internal fission drives more then once. I am assuming the bottom one was supposed to be Internal Fusion. RE: Proof-reading EG - radtech497 - 06-19-2017 Possibly inertial fusion. Radtech497 RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-22-2017 I think that 'internal' is probably correct - it refers to propulsion whether the fission or fusion reaction is contained, as opposed to occurring externally and pushing against a 'pusher plate' - as in a Project Orion external pulse system. There is a fairly arbitrary line between internal and external - it depends on the shape of the 'pusher plate' or containment field, I suppose. RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 06-24-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48fdb8829e239 Version War, The The 7523 should be 4523. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45eaf185003b5 Authenticity Purges, Authenticity War This article need links. For example: Re-Evaluation period , Solar Organisation , Fomalhaut FAS , Terran Federation. RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-24-2017 All fixed; I've added an article to the Authenticity page as well. RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 06-25-2017 http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48225fe6e67ad Hazard Rating The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Ken Ferjik, Interstellar Age, toposophic levels, memeset, fundamental sentient rights , Sephirotic, Deeper Covenant, transapient, transapientech, blight, synsect, ahuman. "sapient being" maybe should be "sophont being". Also link. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2ad0f11181 9999 AT to Present: (Current Era) The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Empledok-cetic , Outer Volumes , Cygexba , Jean Te Uahlg Aestheticism, Old Earth, Verifex, Gehenna cluster, Carina Wormhole network, "the Chaos". Quote:10400 - The population of the Impossible Dyson reaches 22 trillion; Venus population reaches 2 billion I think this population has to be revised. Quote:the Paradigm might be brewing some "offspring expansion spheres" in the periphery, the Amalgamation wants in as usual ("Feed me!"), the NoCoZo is trying to make a buck from all of this, Keter doesn't answer calls ("Keter is not in right now, It is contemplating the All. Please call again next kalpa"), This part looks like something comic, or humorous, not like an encyclopedia. Quote:. Every civilisation from the distant past has fallen eventually; will the same thing happen one day to civilisation in the Orion Arm? This reminds me Ozymandias. And on the pedestal these words appear: 'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!' Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away.[1] ^ Percy Bysshe Shelley, "Ozymandias" Another article to add links: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480a4f64762fd The Chaos The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: PanVirt , Carina Wormhole network, Negentropy Alliance , The Solar Dominion, Caretaker Gods and Metasoft Version Tree , The Cyberian Foundation, NoCoZo, Utopia Sphere , Mutual Progress Alliance, Sophic League and Communion, Perseus Princes, Amalgamation, Keter , RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 06-28-2017 This article need links too: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4650fa4677e07 Free Sophic Polities Links to: Minds (with caps) , NoCoZo - Sophic League , ComEmp and Re-Evaluation periods , Cyborg , Fast Meditation Orbital Chain , Hyperutilization Supremacy. |