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RE: Proof-reading EG - Matterplay1 - 06-02-2015
(06-02-2015, 06:41 AM)stevebowers Wrote: I've updated the New Gaia article somewhat-
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f7d26295d0f
and added a new image. Are there any other edits to the content that might be made?
![[Image: newgaia.png]](http://www.orionsarm.com/im_store/newgaia.png)
Nice image. I'll put my article on the list for an an 'cleanup' edit, and if I have any content suggestions in that I'll mention them here. Anybody else who has suggestions, please float them here in the next couple of days too & I'll look to integrating those if there's agreement on them.
RE: Proof-reading EG - chris0033547 - 06-02-2015
Nice image, Steve. Here are two more articles which need some tweaking:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc30971c3c5
Quote:For example A superior who takes up running will rapidly adapt to a level of cardiovascular fitness rivaling that of the best marathoner.
Here's a formatting error; I think that the newline after felinoid should be deleted:
Quote:felinoid
vertical pupils
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc2ccba05bf
Quote:only a fee for the the splicing was charged
Quote:A generation of superbabies were growing up into child entrepreneurs are forcing big changes
A formatting error involving a superfluous whitespace:
Quote:as generally attempted in mainstream efforts , weightlessness
Quote:especially the SMI²LEs
Is the following orange word really correct? Shouldn't it be gengineered?
Quote:the GeneTEK faction had geneered their own deep-space subspecies
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-02-2015
I think geneered is a synonym, rather than an error.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464e8e23a8b54
I personally prefer it as a word, but it is just a little less clear than the alternative.
RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 06-03-2015
The Chameleon
Quote:The largest face is 2599 meters across, the smallest 2931 meters.Should be switched around.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 06-03-2015
(06-03-2015, 05:53 AM)PortalHunter Wrote: The Chameleon
Quote:The largest face is 2599 meters across, the smallest 2931 meters.Should be switched around.
Fixed
Todd
RE: Proof-reading EG - chris0033547 - 06-09-2015
The Interplanetary Age article references itself:
Quote:The Interplanetary Age had begun.
(It's an active link in the article.)
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-09-2015
Yeah, that should probably be the Interplanetary Era. Amended.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Cray - 06-12-2015
Trivia:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/460c3aec50c95
"Formerly extinct terragen gymnosperms that superficially resemble cycads, but reproduce more like flowering pants."
I think that should be "pLants."
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-14-2015
Heh heh - fixed.
RE: Proof-reading EG - PortalHunter - 06-20-2015
Solsys
The 'more info here' link for the Asteroid Belt leads to the Mars article. It should lead here instead.