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RE: Proof-reading EG - sandcastles - 06-19-2019
I was looking over the article. Places and Locales, and found soething odd...
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45e38d140e9e5
It says "Much of Vatican City" was placed in a vault. Since it's comparatively small, why didn't Gaia, or whoever, put *all* of it in the vault? It seems strange the whole thing wasn't preserved. Can that be changed? I don't know who is allowed to change articles.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 06-19-2019
Sounds like a good idea. Maybe they simply left out the hot dog stalls and ice cream stands.
RE: Proof-reading EG - Avengium - 10-06-2019
Hi,
Terran Federation sephirotic empire ruling Yave is missing an hyperlink to Yave article. Currently the word is in plain text.
TF: https://orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce4e17cd0c6 (Terran Federation)
Yave article:
https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/49b1d3dcb27f6 (Yave)
Also, we could merge Gevurah article and https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/4682fac4226d7 Judge, The (The just one)
RE: Proof-reading EG - Cray - 10-08-2019
The updated Technocalypse article appears to have an incorrect picture:
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/559d3b5ae17aa
The picture associated with the caption, "Padang Harbour arcology, 572 AT. The arcology was a wonder of biological architecture until the Black Rot arrived. The struggle between the Rot and the Sharp Orchid 3.2 bluegoo severely damaged all organic materials in the vicinity," is just of the Earth and moon, not of an arcology.
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 10-09-2019
Fixed. Thanks!
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 01-09-2021
The “frontispiece” is blank for Voices: Future Tense #26 at
https://www.orionsarm.com/page/491
RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 01-09-2021
Using the search field at the top of https://www.orionsarm.com/page/491 triggers the browser warning
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It would be nice if that warning didn’t happen.
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RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 01-09-2021
That's an unusual one. I don't think we can fix that ourselves. Something for Trond to look at, I think.
RE: Proof-reading EG - sandcastles - 01-10-2021
This article on Druidworld is interesting, it was written by Jorge Ditchkenberg, but maybe he isn't a native English speaker. There are several places in the article which could be re-written. The second-to-last paragraph could be more clear on what happened.
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48ff6392ccc7e
RE: Proof-reading EG - stevebowers - 01-11-2021
I wouldn't necessarily expect Druidworld to need 'voluntary memory conditioning'. Just a bit of mild memetic engineering should make this planet into a mildly divergent culture with a few slightly unusual beliefs.