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RE: Proof-reading EG - Worldtree - 07-14-2021 (07-12-2021, 05:40 PM)The Architect post # 963 Wrote:could delete titanite , and just keep that vague for now(07-12-2021, 05:38 PM)The Architect post # 963 Wrote: https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b27e35ae4The Architect post # 964 those two events could technically happen at the same time - establishing the republic amidst a disaster (07-12-2021, 05:50 PM)The Architect post # 965 Wrote: The Architect post # 965 (07-12-2021, 06:08 PM)The Architect post #966 Wrote: Continuing (07-12-2021, 09:25 PM)The Architect post #967 Wrote: https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/502d136b998e9 (07-12-2021, 10:51 PM)The Architect post #968 Wrote: The pervasive danger and uncertainty that characterized the period eventually gave way to the stabilizing First Federation (07-12-2021, 11:12 PM)The Architect post #969 Wrote: Struggling in the depths of arguably the greatest crisis that humanity had faced (spelling error, corrected) RE: Proof-reading EG - The Astronomer - 07-14-2021 I thought we've decided to retcon the Titanite occupation of Mars? Even if there's an attack, Danger suggested in the Martian Terraformation thread (I think) that it's very unlikely that Mars is going to lose against the invaders, and I agree on that. RE: Proof-reading EG - The Architect - 07-14-2021 (07-14-2021, 12:43 AM)Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: Continuing Nothing actually, I misread this one RE: Proof-reading EG - Worldtree - 07-14-2021 (07-14-2021, 01:07 AM)The Astronomer Wrote: I thought we've decided to retcon the Titanite occupation of Mars? Even if there's an attack, Danger suggested in the Martian Terraformation thread (I think) that it's very unlikely that Mars is going to lose against the invaders, and I agree on that. ok I'll delete 'titanite' RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 09-07-2021 Star too far: The article https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45f9757b533b6 (Argelander) specifies the imaginary(?) star designation JD 344111-890 and says it's equivalent to TYC 8579-870-1. Unfortunately that star was recently measured to be about 1400 LY away instead of the specified 219 LY. Presumably a new star should be chosen. RE: Proof-reading EG - selden - 09-07-2021 Another star too far: The article https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464f55d50a038 (Fragan Sphere, The) says that the brightest star in its region is HIP 18608, 205 LY from Earth. Unfortunately, recent measurements have placed it about 1100 LY away. Presumably a new star should be chosen. RE: Proof-reading EG - Worldtree - 10-23-2021 was in drafts folder- these terms seem un-needed? https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4675e9adb4ee7 https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/52b12ccea56de womanimal/manimal/ humanimal made invisible remove from splice page https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45beac611ad40 RE: Proof-reading EG - Drashner1 - 10-24-2021 (10-23-2021, 01:06 AM)Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: was in drafts folder- Agreed on all points, although I'd actually suggest deleting the two stubs entirely. They aren't terms we have ever used beyond the initial 'throw everything at the wall and see what sticks' phase of the early OA project. Todd RE: Proof-reading EG - TheOkayGuy - 06-07-2023 Inconsistency in https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4af5fa1127e47 (Fubas Clone Goo Event) "Fubaii" and "Fubasii" are both used as the plural of "Fubas", where one term should be used RE: Proof-reading EG - Worldtree - 06-07-2023 (06-07-2023, 12:55 PM)TheOkayGuy Wrote: Inconsistency in https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4af5fa1127e47 (Fubas Clone Goo Event) thank you! |