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Thread: [Encyclopedia Galactica] Heavtal Rewrite
Post: RE: [Encyclopedia Galactica] Heavtal Rewrite
Drashner1 Wrote: (09-01-2023, 12:21 PM)
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Article has now been updated.
Please look it over and let me know if any additional changes or corrections are needed.
Thanks!
Todd
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There's two ... |
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Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles
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09-01-2023, 12:49 PM |
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Thread: [Encyclopedia Galactica] Heavtal Rewrite
Post: [Encyclopedia Galactica] Heavtal Rewrite
(Note that I originally posted this in the wrong forum)
Here's a rewrite of the Heavtal Article:
Heavtal, also known as the Heavtal Music Museum, is a virchworld brought online by the musicology... |
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08-31-2023, 06:45 AM |
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Thread: [EG] Heavtal Rewrite
Post: RE: [EG] Heavtal Rewrite
Avengium Wrote: (08-30-2023, 02:06 AM)
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Heavtal article: https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/617617ee9bdc7
I think you could signal what are the changes on your version with bolded letters or s... |
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Creative Writing
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08-30-2023, 04:20 AM |
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Thread: [EG] Heavtal Rewrite
Post: [EG] Heavtal Rewrite
Here's the rewrite of the Heavtal article with more improved grammar and sentences:
Heavtal, also known as the Heavtal Music Museum, is a virchworld that was brought online on Kepler 14, 4555 AT, b... |
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08-30-2023, 01:02 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
When I mean cancel, I mean put on hold. |
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07-10-2023, 05:46 AM |
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Thread: Set-up for a page dedicated to the Olympus pill as described in the god seed article
Post: RE: Set-up for a page dedicated to the Olympus pil...
It got potential keep it up. |
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07-07-2023, 08:07 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
Honestly? I'm just going to cancel that for now as I now have a 40k fan fiction to write. |
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07-06-2023, 10:19 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
I'm thinking about having the story be just about Riley and Alex going on a month long business trip together. |
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03-23-2023, 08:02 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
I have been watching the Terrible Writing Advice on YouTube and it sorta helped me get an idea on how to go about my story. Hell, your guy's suggestions gave me good ideas as well. |
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01-23-2023, 06:28 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
So any suggestions you guys might have for me? |
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01-23-2023, 05:22 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
Update: My gaming laptop is currently getting repaired, so I'll have to put working on The Vacation on halt until it gets repaired. |
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01-19-2023, 10:06 AM |
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Thread: I Dislike the ICOG from the Xelee Sequence
Post: I Dislike the ICOG from the Xelee Sequence
I think that the Interim Coatiltion of Governance from the Xeelee Sequence is a dumber and poorly written version of the Imperium of Man from 40k.
I think that because despite having technology so ... |
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General Off-topic Discussion
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12-31-2022, 02:38 PM |
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Thread: What are you guys reading?
Post: RE: What are you guys reading?
From what I read of Monster Musume so far, it's quite risqué but is sure as hell funny enough to make me at least grin. |
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10-19-2022, 07:41 AM |
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Thread: What are you guys reading?
Post: What are you guys reading?
So what fiction are you guys reading? For me, I'm reading the manga Monster Musume by Okayado. |
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10-19-2022, 04:23 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
Each chapter of my novella will have two days. How does that sound to you guys? |
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10-07-2022, 12:03 PM |
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Thread: Videogame set in the Orion's Arm Universe?
Post: RE: Videogame set in the Orion's Arm Universe?
I did thought of an idea of a Roblox game that's part the Orion's Arm universe. |
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Other Game-related Discussion
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09-20-2022, 09:12 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
One of the anime and manga series that inspired me to do this OA fiction is My Dress-Up Darling by Fukuda Shinichi. |
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09-13-2022, 10:16 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
Apart from that, I'm planning on having the characters go to some kind of barge restaurant and go from there for the first chapter. |
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09-12-2022, 06:31 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
Not to mention, I'll try and make "sexy" characters like Qratza more than one dimensional as well. Because honestly, it's better for me to situate those kinds of characters in a specific context than... |
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09-11-2022, 10:55 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
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09-01-2022, 12:44 PM |