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Thread: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
Post: RE: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
| Hello, just gently bumping this thread to see if anyone was able to read my second draft. Thank you! |
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11-29-2025, 12:51 PM |
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Thread: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
Post: RE: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
| Hello all. Here is my next draft for my vignette. I am going to expand more on it. But just sending it over if you have any feedback.
Please note my responses to comments below.
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11-25-2025, 12:57 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Worldtree Wrote: (11-04-2025, 07:24 AM)
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InterstellarSleeper Wrote: (11-04-2025, 06:55 AM)
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Thanks all. Is it possible to submit my vignette for inclusion in the Frog’s Head Encyclopedia Galacti... |
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11-04-2025, 08:28 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Thanks all. Is it possible to submit my vignette for inclusion in the Frog’s Head Encyclopedia Galactica Article as well?
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46510b2b2c317 (https://www.orionsarm.c... |
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11-04-2025, 06:55 AM |
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Thread: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
Post: Amazonia Habitat - Wilson Swarm Vignette
| Hello all. Here is another vignette I am in the process of writing. It takes place in a Amazon forest like habitat in the Wilson Dyson swarm in the Utopia Sphere. I have it written as a diary from a r... |
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10-27-2025, 04:58 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello all. Below is my latest draft. Here are some noteworthy edits I made below.
Regarding Drashner1’s item 1
I replaced most if not all repetitive instances of quasi-generational ships with di... |
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10-20-2025, 05:33 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Worldtree Wrote: (09-10-2025, 11:48 AM)
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Nice!
I think there’s a lot of details that make this a little weird if this were a formal proposal? Like, it feels more like a letter? Or the introducti... |
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09-10-2025, 12:30 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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stevebowers Wrote: (06-24-2024, 07:26 PM)
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In the next week or so, I may make an image of the Rabelais. Do you have a clear image of it in mind?
We should be aware of a few things. True generation... |
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09-10-2025, 11:24 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hey all. Just bumping this thread to see if anyone noticed the new draft, I wrote for Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais. Would appreciate any feedback. I am hoping to be able to share... |
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06-24-2024, 05:41 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello, here is my next draft
To the Directorate:
My name is Dr. Forshee Schmidt, and I am the lead researcher of the quasi-generational ship Institute on Horvat Station, located in Jupiter’s orb... |
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06-05-2024, 01:39 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello. This vignette is back on my radar. I needed to take a break from it and return to it. I will reply with an updated draft as soon as I am finished. |
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09-08-2023, 11:48 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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The Astronomer Wrote: (05-20-2022, 06:03 PM)
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The bioships were indeed quite slow by Federation standards; as they are now, they only flew at something like .12c. The Dyaushpitr was launched two hu... |
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05-31-2022, 02:13 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-23-2022, 02:29 PM)
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Why is it important to send a mission before the Rabelais arrives in the vicinity of Iota Horologi?
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I think I may need to do some rewriting here to mak... |
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04-03-2022, 06:10 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello. Thanks for the feedback. Here is how I calculated and determined the length of time for the rotation of the station.
I am envisioning Horvat Station to be similar in size and characteristics... |
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02-24-2022, 09:02 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (02-22-2022, 01:12 PM)
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I love it! It’s a great little vignette and I appreciate how much you’ve improved it by expanding the writing since your first post!
This has the maki... |
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02-22-2022, 01:39 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello All. I published another draft of Forshee Schmidt’s proposal for his investigation into the Quasi-Generational Ships. I have included the draft in my previous post in this thread. I added some r... |
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02-22-2022, 12:55 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello:
I had added an updated draft of this proposal below. Here are a few of my revisions.
1. I integrated the visit to the Genen Monument in Horvat Story within the proposal to the Federation ... |
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02-14-2022, 03:26 AM |
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Thread: The Starlost TV Series
Post: RE: The Starlost TV Series
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-04-2022, 12:40 PM)
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Fascinating! Many many many years ago (as in back in high school - I'm 52 now) I bought a themed collection of SF stories all about interstellar travel.
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02-04-2022, 01:15 PM |
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Thread: The Starlost TV Series
Post: The Starlost TV Series
| I have recently discovered this great series from the 1970s called The Starlost (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Starlost). Harlan Ellison was the creator and writer of this show. I wanted to see if... |
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02-04-2022, 12:11 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Here is another draft. I added additional descriptive language and context[/size][size=small] for the Memorial in Paragraph One. I also altered the present tense sentences concerning the Generation Sh... |
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