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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story Second Draf...
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Drashner1 Wrote: (12-31-2024, 12:14 AM)
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Gave this a read thru...thoughts and comments below...
Tangle10 Wrote: (11-10-2024, 04:13 AM)
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The Anthropic Intermission
This definition has its o... |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: RE: NGC 1513
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Drashner1 Wrote: (12-11-2024, 10:27 PM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (12-11-2024, 12:41 PM)
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All good ideas, thank you very much! I mostly chose the long timescale because I was under the impression that th... |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: RE: NGC 1513
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Drashner1 Wrote: (12-09-2024, 11:37 PM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (12-08-2024, 01:14 PM)
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I'd been banging out some thoughts for timescales, yeah! The initial establishment is before ~three thousand year... |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: RE: NGC 1513
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Worldtree Wrote: (12-05-2024, 12:17 PM)
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All this sounds great to me
So far all I have to suggest is that is would be really great if you add a vignette at some point if you’re open to that. It’... |
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Thread: Oort Cloud utilization
Post: RE: Oort Cloud utilization
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stevebowers Wrote: (12-05-2024, 06:23 AM)
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Arthur C Clarke once suggested that a very powerful explosion could be used to emit a short spike of radiation which would then reflect off the deep space... |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: RE: NGC 1513
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Rakuen07 Wrote: (12-03-2024, 10:55 AM)
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I think that, if you want another source about historical facts not known through telescopic observations, the S3 could very ocasionally talk about the histo... |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: RE: NGC 1513
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Worldtree Wrote: (12-03-2024, 02:05 AM)
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[...]overall I’d just say since it’s an ahuman controlled region, by what methods do we know the history and details? They sound fine to me , but sometimes... |
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12-03-2024, 10:35 AM |
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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: NGC 1513
| Hello, all! As discussed over the past month and a half, I've been working on an article idea- I've been a bit worried that some of it wouldn't fit, but I've reached the point where I'm up to posting ... |
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Thread: Hey everyone
Post: RE: Hey everyone
| Welcome aboard! System building is really fun, I hope you enjoy! o7 |
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The Arrivals Lounge
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
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Drashner1 Wrote: (11-20-2024, 11:33 AM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (11-20-2024, 09:08 AM)
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Sorry for asking such a minor question in the thread, but- I can't find the edit button on my original post; is t... |
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11-20-2024, 11:49 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story First Draft
| Sorry for asking such a minor question in the thread, but- I can't find the edit button on my original post; is there a way to edit the thread title so it properly shows that we're on the second draft... |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story Second Draf...
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Worldtree Wrote: (11-10-2024, 03:08 AM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (11-09-2024, 02:58 PM)
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Here's that second draft! Took me a while, I got distracted.
most of the changes you made are in blue https://te... |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: The Anthropic Intermission - Story Second Draft
| Here's that second draft! Took me a while, I got distracted.
The Anthropic Intermission
Beginning recording- transcription and editing of thought-stream record commences… now.
In the firs... |
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Thread: New Callisto System Former Taurus Nexus observation outpost - 1st Draft
Post: RE: New Callisto System Former Taurus Nexus observ...
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RatCat King Wrote: (11-03-2024, 12:24 PM)
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Frontier Period: “ Taurus Ahuman Civilization Far Observatory, are set up by the dark and distant Affr-jam to learn more about the civilizati... |
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11-04-2024, 11:15 AM |
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Thread: HEEC idea seed: Starburster Civilization
Post: RE: HEEC idea seed: Starburster Civilization
| I might honestly consider it slightly outrunning the news of the Taurus Nexus- perhaps one or the other is more obvious, but the news of both reaches Sol ~1558 AT? That means some portions of the Terr... |
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Thread: Thyresta Thyread
Post: RE: Thyresta Thyread
| I quite like the idea of the Thyresta being even more of an 'eerie mirror' to the Terragens! I do have concerns with the timeframe, though- 28 million years ago is solidly within the time of the great... |
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General Setting Discussion
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Thread: Emergence of Transapients Discussion Thread
Post: RE: Emergence of Transapients Discussion Thread
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stevebowers Wrote: (10-26-2024, 04:44 AM)
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Also, the first S5 appeared in the '3900s' rather than a specific date.
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The first unsuccessful ascension to S:5 was in 3909; the first s... |
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Thread: Crystallographer's Nightmare
Post: RE: Crystallographer's Nightmare
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ProxCenBound Wrote: (10-23-2024, 08:41 AM)
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I wonder how many white dwarfs there would be in the Terragen Sphere total anyway? Within 20 ly (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_nearest_stars) the... |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story First Draft
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Drashner1 Wrote: (10-22-2024, 10:56 PM)
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In terms of quality of writing, this is very well done. Very few grammar or structure issues, very little wordsmithing of that sort needed. I also don't see... |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
| I came to, after a few hours looking at the EG and thinking about the Gaiacene, and discovered I'd written this. It's late for me, so I want to put it up and see if it might be something people would ... |
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