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  Rainbow Thread: Possible Snapshot
Post: RE: Possible Snapshot

If you want to suggest some ideas I'm all ears, I've tried a couple of times now to fit a scene or two into what's already been written but I can't find a good way to make it seamless. :s
BNKirby Creative Writing 19 171 05-27-2022, 02:30 PM
    Thread: Possible Snapshot
Post: RE: Possible Snapshot

Reading through it again I'm in agreement with it fitting better with the singleship article. It doesn't have one yet and the Ascension article already has a fairly lengthy snapshot.
BNKirby Creative Writing 19 171 05-12-2022, 04:47 AM
    Thread: Possible Snapshot
Post: RE: Possible Snapshot

Here's a rewritten version based on the feedback I've gotten here. I changed the over all distance to 60 lights, still a ways a way because I meant for the narrator to be from out in the boonies, a pl...
BNKirby Creative Writing 19 171 03-10-2022, 12:25 PM
    Thread: Possible Snapshot
Post: RE: Possible Snapshot

Quote: -- I'd be interested to see the rest of this that you did manage to write? -- That's all I managed to write, I have dozens of short snippets for stories I wanted to write over the year...
BNKirby Creative Writing 19 171 03-08-2022, 05:48 AM
    Thread: Possible Snapshot
Post: Possible Snapshot

This was the beginnings of a much longer story I wrote several years ago about the Ascension Mazes, but it didn't get very far. Going back to it I think it might work better as a snapshot, though I'm ...
BNKirby Creative Writing 19 171 03-07-2022, 12:20 PM
    Thread: Uploading in "Upload"
Post: RE: Uploading in "Upload"

I binged the entire first season in one sitting and while it was reasonably entertaining and had some good humor I was ultimately left feeling disappointed. It just felt too limited, I know this was m...
BNKirby Books, Games, Movies, and TV 1 2,285 06-13-2020, 04:34 AM
    Thread: Ascension Mazes
Post: RE: Ascension Mazes

A lot of thanks to everyone who replied especially Dfleymmes1134. :) This has given me a ton to think about, though now I'm not even sure what kind of story I want this to be whether it be a story of ...
BNKirby Creative Writing 10 198 10-10-2019, 01:27 AM
    Thread: Ascension Mazes
Post: Ascension Mazes

I've been thinking about writing a short (or not so short) story about a modo going through an Ascension Maze in an attempt to rise through the toposophic hierarchy. However I'm not entirely sure what...
BNKirby Creative Writing 10 198 10-07-2019, 03:05 PM
    Thread: Transapient free story ideas.
Post: RE: Transapient free story ideas.

QwertyYerty Wrote: (09-23-2017, 06:37 AM) -- BNKirby Wrote: (09-22-2017, 01:51 PM) -- BNKirby Wrote: (09-22-2017, 10:21 AM) -- I've been toying with the idea of a team of near-baslines  competing i...
BNKirby Creative Writing 23 531 09-23-2017, 09:42 AM
    Thread: Transapient free story ideas.
Post: RE: Transapient free story ideas.

BNKirby Wrote: (09-22-2017, 10:21 AM) -- I've been toying with the idea of a team of near-baslines  competing in The Everythingia Worldbuilding Contest, maybe in the form of journal entrys from one o...
BNKirby Creative Writing 23 531 09-22-2017, 01:51 PM
    Thread: Transapient free story ideas.
Post: RE: Transapient free story ideas.

I've been toying with the idea of a team of near-baslines competing in The Everythingia Worldbuilding Contest, maybe in the form of journal entrys from one or multiple contestents. I'm just throwing ...
BNKirby Creative Writing 23 531 09-22-2017, 10:21 AM
    Thread: Newbie Question
Post: RE: Newbie Question

Thanks for that, I look forward to seeing what this community has to offer.:D
BNKirby The Arrivals Lounge 5 10,389 06-22-2016, 01:27 AM
    Thread: Newbie Question
Post: Newbie Question

I found OA while looking for novels to read and have spent the past few hours looking through the Encyclopedia, may I ask how deep of a rabbit hole have I stumbled upon?
BNKirby The Arrivals Lounge 5 10,389 06-22-2016, 01:17 AM