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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello. This vignette is back on my radar. I needed to take a break from it and return to it. I will reply with an updated draft as soon as I am finished. |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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The Astronomer Wrote: (05-20-2022, 06:03 PM)
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The bioships were indeed quite slow by Federation standards; as they are now, they only flew at something like .12c. The Dyaushpitr was launched two hu... |
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05-31-2022, 02:13 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-23-2022, 02:29 PM)
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Why is it important to send a mission before the Rabelais arrives in the vicinity of Iota Horologi?
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I think I may need to do some rewriting here to mak... |
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04-03-2022, 06:10 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello. Thanks for the feedback. Here is how I calculated and determined the length of time for the rotation of the station.
I am envisioning Horvat Station to be similar in size and characteristics... |
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02-24-2022, 09:02 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (02-22-2022, 01:12 PM)
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I love it! It’s a great little vignette and I appreciate how much you’ve improved it by expanding the writing since your first post!
This has the maki... |
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02-22-2022, 01:39 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Hello All. I published another draft of Forshee Schmidt’s proposal for his investigation into the Quasi-Generational Ships. I have included the draft in my previous post in this thread. I added some r... |
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02-22-2022, 12:55 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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I had added an updated draft of this proposal below. Here are a few of my revisions.
1. I integrated the visit to the Genen Monument in Horvat Story within the proposal to the Federation ... |
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02-14-2022, 03:26 AM |
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Thread: The Starlost TV Series
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-04-2022, 12:40 PM)
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Fascinating! Many many many years ago (as in back in high school - I'm 52 now) I bought a themed collection of SF stories all about interstellar travel.
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02-04-2022, 01:15 PM |
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Thread: The Starlost TV Series
Post: The Starlost TV Series
| I have recently discovered this great series from the 1970s called The Starlost (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Starlost). Harlan Ellison was the creator and writer of this show. I wanted to see if... |
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02-04-2022, 12:11 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Here is another draft. I added additional descriptive language and context[/size][size=small] for the Memorial in Paragraph One. I also altered the present tense sentences concerning the Generation Sh... |
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02-03-2022, 01:02 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
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Drashner1 Wrote: (01-31-2022, 12:40 PM)
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So, overall this is very nice. :)
However, there are a few minor issues:
a) In the second paragraph the ship is stated to be 16km long. That is quite larg... |
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01-31-2022, 01:24 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| I wrote a new draft on this account. I wanted to make it a letter of a researcher in House Genen requesting the First Federation to sponsor a project.
I am looking towards the zenith of the cloud... |
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01-31-2022, 03:33 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Here is my latest draft. I added more speculation and context to the account.
What happened to the caretakers of the Rabelais? Some of us on station believe a blight spread through the great quasi-... |
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01-29-2022, 01:25 PM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| I agree. There is certainly more room to add details of speculation on the mysterious circumstances of the Rabelais. I will keep adding to the account. I will post additional revisions of the account ... |
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01-27-2022, 11:43 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: RE: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabe...
| Thanks for the Feedback! Here is the revised version:
What Happened to the caretakers of the Rabelais? Some say they reverted to savagery over those long years of travel though interstellar space. ... |
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01-27-2022, 11:00 AM |
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Thread: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
Post: Happenings on the Quasi-Generational Ship Rabelais
| I wrote a little snippet about some mysterious occurrences aboard the Genetekker (gentian) quasi-generational ship en route from Jupiter to Iota Horologii.
What Happened to the caretakers of the Ra... |
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01-26-2022, 12:48 PM |
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Thread: First Time on the Orion’s Arm Forums and looking to contribute
Post: RE: First Time on the Orion’s Arm Forums and looki...
| Thank you for the welcome and the pointers. I will certainly check those out. I look forward to learning more about this community and hopefully contributing. |
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01-21-2022, 10:06 AM |
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Thread: First Time on the Orion’s Arm Forums and looking to contribute
Post: First Time on the Orion’s Arm Forums and looking t...
| Hello All:
This is my first time posting on the Orion’s Arm Forums. I just want to say thank you to all of those who have contributed high quality articles and stories to this site. You have given ... |
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