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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| I'm thinking about having the story be just about Riley and Alex going on a month long business trip together. |
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03-23-2023, 08:02 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| I have been watching the Terrible Writing Advice on YouTube and it sorta helped me get an idea on how to go about my story. Hell, your guy's suggestions gave me good ideas as well. |
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01-23-2023, 06:28 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| So any suggestions you guys might have for me? |
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01-23-2023, 05:22 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Update: My gaming laptop is currently getting repaired, so I'll have to put working on The Vacation on halt until it gets repaired. |
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01-19-2023, 10:06 AM |
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Thread: I Dislike the ICOG from the Xelee Sequence
Post: I Dislike the ICOG from the Xelee Sequence
| I think that the Interim Coatiltion of Governance from the Xeelee Sequence is a dumber and poorly written version of the Imperium of Man from 40k.
I think that because despite having technology so ... |
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12-31-2022, 02:38 PM |
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Thread: What are you guys reading?
Post: RE: What are you guys reading?
| From what I read of Monster Musume so far, it's quite risqué but is sure as hell funny enough to make me at least grin. |
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General Off-topic Discussion
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10-19-2022, 07:41 AM |
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Thread: What are you guys reading?
Post: What are you guys reading?
| So what fiction are you guys reading? For me, I'm reading the manga Monster Musume by Okayado. |
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General Off-topic Discussion
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10-19-2022, 04:23 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Each chapter of my novella will have two days. How does that sound to you guys? |
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10-07-2022, 12:03 PM |
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Thread: Videogame set in the Orion's Arm Universe?
Post: RE: Videogame set in the Orion's Arm Universe?
| I did thought of an idea of a Roblox game that's part the Orion's Arm universe. |
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Other Game-related Discussion
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09-20-2022, 09:12 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| One of the anime and manga series that inspired me to do this OA fiction is My Dress-Up Darling by Fukuda Shinichi. |
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09-13-2022, 10:16 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Apart from that, I'm planning on having the characters go to some kind of barge restaurant and go from there for the first chapter. |
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09-12-2022, 06:31 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Not to mention, I'll try and make "sexy" characters like Qratza more than one dimensional as well. Because honestly, it's better for me to situate those kinds of characters in a specific context than... |
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09-11-2022, 10:55 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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09-01-2022, 12:44 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Though, I'd make sure the descriptions of characters like Qratza isn't too detailed or it'll be distracting. That and I'll play it safe by cutting to black than having sex scenes. |
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09-01-2022, 12:26 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| How does that sound to you? |
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09-01-2022, 12:15 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Now I could also introduce Qratza into the story and have the conflict later on be just her trying to decide if she wants to gets into a relationship with Alex or Qratza. |
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09-01-2022, 07:07 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| The character Riley is 18 years old and never has dated before. |
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08-28-2022, 08:09 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Drashner1 Wrote: (08-25-2022, 01:09 PM)
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Arrittrobi Wrote: (08-25-2022, 12:50 PM)
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For the story, I want it to go for this approach: Not much conflict and such in the earlier parts but over time... |
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08-25-2022, 01:13 PM |
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Thread: What music are you listening to right now?
Post: RE: What music are you listening to right now?
| I'm listen to Lost In Space by Hubrid. I think the song suits Orion's Arm very well.
Link to song: https://soundcloud.com/hubrid-sound/lost-in-space |
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General Off-topic Discussion
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08-25-2022, 01:01 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Drashner1 Wrote: (08-25-2022, 12:31 PM)
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Arrittrobi Wrote: (08-24-2022, 01:31 PM)
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Anyways, how should I go about writing the description for my story?
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It's been a busy day (and evening) an... |
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08-25-2022, 12:50 PM |
