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Thread: Ascension Flashfic
Post: Ascension Flashfic
| Hi all. It's been awhile since I was around but I wanted to hand off a flash-fic I wrote. It could be set in OA (I think), but as I was writing it I kind of left it open to incorporation in one of my ... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
Creative Writing
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06-14-2023, 07:42 AM |
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Thread: Vec Concept?
Post: RE: Vec Concept?
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stevebowers Wrote: (02-18-2022, 10:58 PM)
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Manipulators could be hard and soft on the same device; the different designs could be used for different applications- a finely branched set of limbs for... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
Art and Visual Media
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02-19-2022, 04:54 PM |
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Thread: Vec Concept?
Post: RE: Vec Concept?
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-17-2022, 10:03 AM)
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mawrhinamtiskaw Wrote: (02-17-2022, 08:31 AM)
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I wanted some feedback on a vec morph that's been floating around in my head for a few weeks before I did ... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-18-2022, 02:54 PM |
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Thread: Vec Concept?
Post: RE: Vec Concept?
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (02-17-2022, 09:16 AM)
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Sure it could perfectly reasonable
What are the different parts? You could label them if you like
Only criticism I might make is- since the vec h... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-17-2022, 09:28 AM |
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Thread: Vec Concept?
Post: Vec Concept?
| I wanted some feedback on a vec morph that's been floating around in my head for a few weeks before I did anything serious (been apart from some of my supplies for a while, but I'd consider making thi... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-17-2022, 08:31 AM |
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Thread: Negentropic Vignette
Post: RE: Negentropic Vignette
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (02-02-2022, 09:49 AM)
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I’ll comment more later but this is a fantastic start and I love it
Other than the wordsmithing (grammar+ spelling errors ) I think it can definitely ... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-02-2022, 11:54 AM |
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Thread: Negentropic Vignette
Post: RE: Negentropic Vignette
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Rynn Wrote: (02-02-2022, 08:56 AM)
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Good start :) There are some wordsmithing improvements that can be made (look out for overly repeating words, like Pillar in the first paragraph) but I'll leave ... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-02-2022, 11:48 AM |
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Thread: Negentropic Vignette
Post: Negentropic Vignette
| This is a sort of impressionistic little scene I've been toying with. It concerns a young sophont of undisclosed clade going about eir life as an apprentice artist/memetician somewhere along the tense... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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02-02-2022, 08:29 AM |
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Thread: Just steered into port...
Post: RE: Just steered into port...
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Drashner1 Wrote: (02-01-2022, 12:33 AM)
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Hi - Welcome to OA!
If you have any questions or concerns regarding any aspect of the project or setting, please don't hesitate to ask.
Also, please ... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
The Arrivals Lounge
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02-01-2022, 04:48 AM |
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Thread: Just steered into port...
Post: RE: Just steered into port...
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Rynn Wrote: (01-31-2022, 11:46 PM)
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Welcome :) Slice of life and mental health are two of my favourite topics at OA too. For the former the narrative introductions to certain articles are a great w... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
The Arrivals Lounge
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02-01-2022, 04:44 AM |
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Thread: Just steered into port...
Post: Just steered into port...
| Hi, all! I'm really excited to join the forums here and get to know the community better. I've been a reader and writer of science fiction among other things for years, and while most of my own work h... |
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mawrhinamtiskaw |
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