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    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

(10-14-2018, 11:59 PM)Drashner1 Wrote: (10-08-2018, 04:28 AM)Addemup Wrote: Aldan nervously watched the vicious, swirling gases of Saturn from inside the comfort and safety of his personal bubbleh...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-15-2018, 03:51 AM
    Thread: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crossover)
Post: RE: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crosso...

(10-09-2018, 11:07 PM)stevebowers Wrote: Do you have a contributor's bio yet?Woah! Thanks! And no, I don't have a bio yet.
Addemup Creative Writing 13 146 10-09-2018, 11:29 PM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

(10-08-2018, 04:40 AM)Rynn Wrote: Much better :D good job (10-08-2018, 11:22 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: Very nicely done:) I like it lots. Todd Thank you very much! I'm planning on having this snapsh...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-09-2018, 08:50 AM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

Alright - I took all of your feedback and incorporated it into my third draft, albeit in a modified form: Aldan nervously watched the vicious, swirling gases of Saturn from inside the comfort and saf...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-08-2018, 04:28 AM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

(10-06-2018, 01:47 AM)Rynn Wrote: It's not even been a day yet ;) It's worth being patient given the time constraints on members.Sorry about that, I'll try to be more patient in the future. Anyways...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-06-2018, 08:56 AM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

Can anyone please critique the snapshot I posted above?
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-06-2018, 01:04 AM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

Alright, this is the first draft of the snapshot: Aldan quietly observed the vicious, swirling gases of Saturn from inside the comfort and safety of his personal bubblehab. As he nervously watched ...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-05-2018, 04:19 AM
    Thread: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'
Post: RE: Suggestion: 'Snapshots'

(07-20-2018, 02:16 AM)Rynn Wrote: A good place for snapshots, if they can be shrunk down/written at the right length, is the start of relevant articles to provide a slice-of-life view into the terra...
Addemup Creative Writing 35 604 10-04-2018, 09:50 AM
    Thread: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crossover)
Post: RE: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crosso...

After ordering his very first virch, Alam quickly went to sleep on his soft and comfortable smart matter mattress. He was very tired, and he didn’t really want to enter the virch as soon as it was rea...
Addemup Creative Writing 13 146 08-19-2018, 02:33 AM
    Thread: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crossover)
Post: RE: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crosso...

(08-17-2018, 08:05 AM)stevebowers Wrote: An Echo of a Distant Time, eh? Excellent! I'm glad you guys like this. And yes, the title is a reference to the Pink Floyd song "Echoes".
Addemup Creative Writing 13 146 08-17-2018, 09:14 PM
    Thread: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crossover)
Post: Cloudless Every Day You Fall (Non-Canon Crossover)

Cloudless every day you fall, upon my waking eyes. Inviting and inciting me to rise... Alam slouched down in his polymorphic couch, mentally browsing page after page of information on the Known Net. ...
Addemup Creative Writing 13 146 08-17-2018, 07:49 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

(07-25-2018, 01:07 AM)stevebowers Wrote: PolyCubicSpace article now up https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/5b573e02b638e Thank you very much!
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 07-27-2018, 08:12 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

(06-10-2018, 05:55 AM)stevebowers Wrote: At the moment we a re waiting for the site to stabilise after a move; we'll start putting new content up in a few days. Thank you for the information.
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 06-10-2018, 09:01 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

I would still like it to be published; is anyone planning on putting it on the EG?
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 06-10-2018, 05:14 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

So, does anyone think that this article is ready for submission? I personally think it's ready, despite its short length.
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 04-24-2018, 01:17 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

Here's the third draft. I've only made a few minor changes and additions, but I aim for this one to (hopefully) be the final draft: PolyCubicSpace (usually referred to under the acronym PCS) is a mi...
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 04-21-2018, 09:35 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: RE: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

Okay, here's the second draft for the article: PolyCubicSpace (mostly referred to under the acronym PCS) is a mildly popular virch only accessible from within the Quint dyson swarm. Sophonts enterin...
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 04-13-2018, 08:01 AM
    Thread: EG - The Solar System in 10,600 AT
Post: RE: EG - The Solar System in 10,600 AT

(04-10-2018, 10:18 PM)MacGregor Wrote: I suspect that in many K-belt settlements it is more powerful than the Solar Organization. I second this, but not to the degree that MacGregor is suggesting. A...
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 342 5,219 04-11-2018, 07:59 AM
    Thread: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace
Post: Article Draft - PolyCubicSpace

PolyCubicSpace (mostly referred to under the acronym PCS) is a mildly popular virch hosted in the Quint dyson swarm. Sophonts entering the virch for the first time receive a 10x10x10 meter cube that ...
Addemup Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 25 354 04-11-2018, 07:49 AM
    Thread: Polity Journal (Hippocrates 9, 8734 - First Draft)
Post: RE: Polity Journal (Hippocrates 9, 8734 - First Dr...

Just to let you guys know, I'm still planning on working on this.
Addemup Creative Writing 19 272 03-31-2018, 08:41 AM