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    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: RE: We will be Princes of Perseus

Thanks Todd and Dyflemmes for the feedback!  Drashner1 Wrote: (12-07-2021, 12:39 AM) -- I'd suggest adding in a bit here about optical signals or pulses of some kind as well. Optical computing and d...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 12-07-2021, 02:24 PM
    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: RE: We will be Princes of Perseus

Here's an opening, essentially the first of the exposition. Since you know what to look for, and the chosen ending spot, you'll see the "inciting incident." I just want to show this earliest of work. ...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 12-06-2021, 01:19 PM
    Thread: Self-Replicating 'robots' are here...
Post: RE: Self-Replicating 'robots' are here...

I just heard about this on Science Friday, on NPR. So wild! Kinda creepy too....
Prosapien Real Life But OA Relevant 2 695 12-06-2021, 12:49 PM
    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: RE: We will be Princes of Perseus

Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (12-01-2021, 11:31 PM) -- The habitat could begin pushing Your character using their interest in earth history to manipulate them by directing them toward particular historical e...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 12-04-2021, 08:47 AM
    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: RE: We will be Princes of Perseus

If you please, I'd like to vet Kho Dai and the setting a little more before I really start diving into the writing. To begin, I'd like to make this story as accessible to non-OA familiar readers...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 12-01-2021, 01:51 PM
    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: RE: We will be Princes of Perseus

Thanks everyone for the feedback and thoughts! Drashner1 Wrote: (11-28-2021, 09:26 AM) -- b) For your character to do the kind of memetic manipulation that you describe, he/she/e would likely need...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 11-30-2021, 02:17 PM
    Thread: We will be Princes of Perseus
Post: We will be Princes of Perseus

I'm thinking of a series of short stories of a young, foolish, near baseline human (I don't mind altering the physical layout of these characters) that wants to join the Perseus Arm Defense Organizati...
Prosapien Creative Writing 26 217 11-28-2021, 08:24 AM
    Thread: This Place Looks Great!
Post: RE: This Place Looks Great!

Welcome to OA! Wrote: (11-27-2021, 04:28 AM) -- Todd -- Thank you! I'm very excited to get started. The Wilds seem really intriguing along with the Dark Ages. I love hostile settings. I'll see abou...
Prosapien The Arrivals Lounge 5 1,102 11-27-2021, 05:41 AM
    Thread: This Place Looks Great!
Post: This Place Looks Great!

Hello all! I am blown away by what has been created here. It's a perfect example of what a macromind can do! I have never seen world building this in depth. I would very much like to become a pa...
Prosapien The Arrivals Lounge 5 1,102 11-27-2021, 03:14 AM