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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages
| And yes! The O’Neil cylinders! |
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09-07-2020, 03:48 AM |
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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages
| Sounds legit. I’ll tweak those details. I’ll start a draft and we can feel it out from there. Ship design was well hammered out in the previous posts. I have the math too so it should go fairly smooth... |
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09-07-2020, 02:25 AM |
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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages
| Hey Dfley,
I think I finally get it and I agree. I think more is needed to come afterwards and maybe more tweaking.
I am trying to have it implied early on that the crew already knows they are ... |
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09-06-2020, 02:41 AM |
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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages
| Howdy,
I think I've touched on all the points you've made. I've tried to keep it subtle but still directly address your concerns. Edits are in bold.
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08-23-2020, 09:02 PM |
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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (08-14-2020, 03:22 AM)
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now reading back through the comments in the original thread I see a few months ago I can see Todd and the Architect already mentioned some of the issue... |
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08-18-2020, 08:23 AM |
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Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: Into the Dark Ages
| Hello All,
Sorry I disappeared. I blame the pandemic. Everything is screwed up but I’m adjusting. In other words, I’m everyone else. Thanks for welcoming me back, Todd.
I’d like to pick up wher... |
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08-09-2020, 11:52 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
| I'm proposing this for the story cover. A big shout out to Architect for inspiring me to do it. Not sure if that's what he was going for, but he did. It's a pic from NASA, and also free to use. I did ... |
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04-09-2020, 10:50 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
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Drashner1 Wrote: (04-03-2020, 01:24 PM)
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I just had a bad thought - I'm not sure if a cycler will work without a planet or equivalent at either end of the cycle to provide a gravity well for turnin... |
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04-05-2020, 04:48 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
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Drashner1 Wrote: (03-27-2020, 12:23 PM)
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Hm. I'm not sure that will work, I'm afraid. Not so much the shuttle part, but the accelerating the rock part. A cycler is moving at kilometers per second (... |
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04-02-2020, 04:42 AM |
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Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project
| DUDE!! WOW!!
Super impressed. Very inspiring! I'm looking for cover title stuff now because of yours! Way to go! |
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03-27-2020, 09:50 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
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Drashner1 Wrote: (03-23-2020, 01:23 PM)
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I'm fine with it being a cycler. However, under normal operations a cycler wouldn't stay close to anything very long, including asteroids it wants to mine. ... |
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03-27-2020, 09:46 AM |
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Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project
| Sorry if I sound like an idiot here. These new scenes are for your next episode? Does it start with the flash back to the monastery? |
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03-23-2020, 07:04 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
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The Architect Wrote: (03-23-2020, 06:47 AM)
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I though it was 645!?
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Oh yeah, I forgot about that. I started shifting things around in my mind since the timeline for the GS is shifting. I should... |
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03-23-2020, 06:55 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
| A few things I should get nailed down before this next short:
The Convergence - All on board with it being a Cycler? It will have a spinning ring system for artificial gravity. There will be two ri... |
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03-23-2020, 06:54 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
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MacGregor Wrote: (03-22-2020, 09:22 PM)
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Great story! When and where does it take place?
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Thanks! It's in the Belt, 614. |
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03-23-2020, 06:16 AM |
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Thread: The Great Shedding
Post: RE: The Great Shedding
| Hey, revitalizing this with a few suggestions/details I'd like to clamp down.
Date of the GS - I'm suggesting 847, that gives us 33 years until Mondo is destroyed. Mondo can be the catalyst where e... |
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03-23-2020, 06:11 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
| Here's the final draft!
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“NO!” Gazali screamed as she slammed her fist down on the emergency kill switch... |
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03-21-2020, 12:55 PM |
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Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project
| Ocean Untamed sounds good. From an outside perspective, I don't see how it reveals your plot. Untamed is a very open term. |
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03-20-2020, 03:59 AM |
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Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal
| Hey Todd, these are interesting times. Covid-19 and all, so I've been slow to respond. I probably will for a while with all the routine changes.
Drashner1 Wrote: (03-17-2020, 01:01 PM)
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This... |
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03-20-2020, 01:29 AM |
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Thread: Covid-19
Post: RE: Covid-19
| The panic buying. Was that an element discussed in the big-T? Irrational panic inciting more panic along with the profiteering. A specific story around a certain piece of misinformation that cascades ... |
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