The Orion's Arm Universe Project Forums





Search Results
Post Author Forum Replies Views Posted [asc]
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages

And yes! The O’Neil cylinders!
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 09-07-2020, 03:48 AM
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages

Sounds legit. I’ll tweak those details. I’ll start a draft and we can feel it out from there. Ship design was well hammered out in the previous posts. I have the math too so it should go fairly smooth...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 09-07-2020, 02:25 AM
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages

Hey Dfley, I think I finally get it and I agree. I think more is needed to come afterwards and maybe more tweaking. I am trying to have it implied early on that the crew already knows they are dead...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 09-06-2020, 02:41 AM
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages

Howdy, I think I've touched on all the points you've made. I've tried to keep it subtle but still directly address your concerns. Edits are in bold. =================================================...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 08-23-2020, 09:02 PM
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: RE: Into the Dark Ages

(08-14-2020, 03:22 AM)Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: now reading back through the comments in the original thread I see a few months ago I can see Todd and the Architect already mentioned some of the issues i...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 08-18-2020, 08:23 AM
    Thread: Into the Dark Ages
Post: Into the Dark Ages

Hello All, Sorry I disappeared. I blame the pandemic. Everything is screwed up but I’m adjusting. In other words, I’m everyone else. Thanks for welcoming me back, Todd.  I’d like to pick up where I ...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 12 189 08-09-2020, 11:52 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

I'm proposing this for the story cover. A big shout out to Architect for inspiring me to do it. Not sure if that's what he was going for, but he did. It's a pic from NASA, and also free to use. I did ...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 04-09-2020, 10:50 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

(04-03-2020, 01:24 PM)Drashner1 Wrote: I just had a bad thought - I'm not sure if a cycler will work without a planet or equivalent at either end of the cycle to provide a gravity well for turning o...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 04-05-2020, 04:48 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

(03-27-2020, 12:23 PM)Drashner1 Wrote: Hm. I'm not sure that will work, I'm afraid. Not so much the shuttle part, but the accelerating the rock part. A cycler is moving at kilometers per second (7-1...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 04-02-2020, 04:42 AM
    Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project

DUDE!! WOW!! Super impressed. Very inspiring! I'm looking for cover title stuff now because of yours! Way to go!
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 242 2,120 03-27-2020, 09:50 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

(03-23-2020, 01:23 PM)Drashner1 Wrote: I'm fine with it being a cycler. However, under normal operations a cycler wouldn't stay close to anything very long, including asteroids it wants to mine. Whi...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-27-2020, 09:46 AM
    Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project

Sorry if I sound like an idiot here. These new scenes are for your next episode? Does it start with the flash back to the monastery?
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 242 2,120 03-23-2020, 07:04 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

(03-23-2020, 06:47 AM)The Architect Wrote: I though it was 645!? Oh yeah, I forgot about that. I started shifting things around in my mind since the timeline for the GS is shifting. I should probabl...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-23-2020, 06:55 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

A few things I should get nailed down before this next short: The Convergence - All on board with it being a Cycler? It will have a spinning ring system for artificial gravity. There will be two ring...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-23-2020, 06:54 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

(03-22-2020, 09:22 PM)MacGregor Wrote: Great story! When and where does it take place? Thanks! It's in the Belt, 614.
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-23-2020, 06:16 AM
    Thread: The Great Shedding
Post: RE: The Great Shedding

Hey, revitalizing this with a few suggestions/details I'd like to clamp down. Date of the GS - I'm suggesting 847, that gives us 33 years until Mondo is destroyed. Mondo can be the catalyst where eve...
Will the Wanderer General Setting Discussion 38 465 03-23-2020, 06:11 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

Here's the final draft! ========================================================================================== “NO!” Gazali screamed as she slammed her fist down on the emergency kill switch, se...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-21-2020, 12:55 PM
    Thread: New project
Post: RE: New project

Ocean Untamed sounds good. From an outside perspective, I don't see how it reveals your plot. Untamed is a very open term.
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 242 2,120 03-20-2020, 03:59 AM
    Thread: New Proposal
Post: RE: New Proposal

Hey Todd, these are interesting times. Covid-19 and all, so I've been slow to respond. I probably will for a while with all the routine changes. (03-17-2020, 01:01 PM)Drashner1 Wrote: This seems ...
Will the Wanderer Creative Writing 97 960 03-20-2020, 01:29 AM
    Thread: Covid-19
Post: RE: Covid-19

The panic buying. Was that an element discussed in the big-T? Irrational panic inciting more panic along with the profiteering. A specific story around a certain piece of misinformation that cascades ...
Will the Wanderer General Setting Discussion 9 158 03-18-2020, 01:41 PM