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Thread: NGC 1513
Post: NGC 1513
Hello, all! As discussed over the past month and a half, I've been working on an article idea- I've been a bit worried that some of it wouldn't fit, but I've reached the point where I'm up to posting ... |
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Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles
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Thread: Hey everyone
Post: RE: Hey everyone
Welcome aboard! System building is really fun, I hope you enjoy! o7 |
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Tangle10 |
The Arrivals Lounge
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11-30-2024, 05:38 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Drashner1 Wrote: (11-20-2024, 11:33 AM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (11-20-2024, 09:08 AM)
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Sorry for asking such a minor question in the thread, but- I can't find the edit button on my original post; is t... |
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Creative Writing
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11-20-2024, 11:49 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story First Draft
Sorry for asking such a minor question in the thread, but- I can't find the edit button on my original post; is there a way to edit the thread title so it properly shows that we're on the second draft... |
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11-20-2024, 09:08 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story Second Draf...
Worldtree Wrote: (11-10-2024, 03:08 AM)
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Tangle10 Wrote: (11-09-2024, 02:58 PM)
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Here's that second draft! Took me a while, I got distracted.
most of the changes you made are in blue https://te... |
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Creative Writing
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11-10-2024, 04:13 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: The Anthropic Intermission - Story Second Draft
Here's that second draft! Took me a while, I got distracted.
The Anthropic Intermission
Beginning recording- transcription and editing of thought-stream record commences… now.
In the firs... |
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Creative Writing
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11-09-2024, 02:58 PM |
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Thread: New Callisto System Former Taurus Nexus observation outpost - 1st Draft
Post: RE: New Callisto System Former Taurus Nexus observ...
RatCat King Wrote: (11-03-2024, 12:24 PM)
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-HISTORY-
Frontier Period: “ Taurus Ahuman Civilization Far Observatory, are set up by the dark and distant Affr-jam to learn more about the civilizati... |
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Tangle10 |
Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles
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11-04-2024, 11:15 AM |
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Thread: HEEC idea seed: Starburster Civilization
Post: RE: HEEC idea seed: Starburster Civilization
I might honestly consider it slightly outrunning the news of the Taurus Nexus- perhaps one or the other is more obvious, but the news of both reaches Sol ~1558 AT? That means some portions of the Terr... |
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Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles
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11-04-2024, 06:45 AM |
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Thread: Thyresta Thyread
Post: RE: Thyresta Thyread
I quite like the idea of the Thyresta being even more of an 'eerie mirror' to the Terragens! I do have concerns with the timeframe, though- 28 million years ago is solidly within the time of the great... |
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General Setting Discussion
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11-02-2024, 09:16 PM |
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Thread: Emergence of Transapients Discussion Thread
Post: RE: Emergence of Transapients Discussion Thread
stevebowers Wrote: (10-26-2024, 04:44 AM)
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Also, the first S5 appeared in the '3900s' rather than a specific date.
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The first unsuccessful ascension to S:5 was in 3909; the first s... |
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General Setting Discussion
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10-27-2024, 10:23 AM |
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Thread: Crystallographer's Nightmare
Post: RE: Crystallographer's Nightmare
ProxCenBound Wrote: (10-23-2024, 08:41 AM)
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I wonder how many white dwarfs there would be in the Terragen Sphere total anyway? Within 20 ly (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_nearest_stars) the... |
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10-23-2024, 11:16 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: RE: The Anthropic Intermission - Story First Draft
Drashner1 Wrote: (10-22-2024, 10:56 PM)
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In terms of quality of writing, this is very well done. Very few grammar or structure issues, very little wordsmithing of that sort needed. I also don't see... |
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10-23-2024, 03:29 AM |
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Thread: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
Post: The Anthropic Intermission - Short Story
I came to, after a few hours looking at the EG and thinking about the Gaiacene, and discovered I'd written this. It's late for me, so I want to put it up and see if it might be something people would ... |
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10-22-2024, 06:04 PM |
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Thread: Planet Idea: Tohuwabohu
Post: RE: Planet Idea: Tohuwabohu
stevebowers Wrote: (10-22-2024, 05:30 PM)
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My first question on reading the article would be 'who named this planet, and how did its etymology become forgotten?' Presumably it was named by the init... |
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10-22-2024, 05:53 PM |
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Thread: Planet Idea: Tohuwabohu
Post: RE: Planet Idea: Tohuwabohu
I quite like this planet's concept. Perfect atmosphere (...pun not intended) for any crime thrillers or noir tales anyone wants to write in OA, that's for sure! Not sure it's as exceptionally terrifyi... |
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10-22-2024, 08:13 AM |
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Thread: Xenobiota and Xenosophont information and updates
Post: RE: Xenobiota and Xenosophont information and upda...
ProxCenBound Wrote: (07-29-2024, 11:19 AM)
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-List of Xenosophonts within Terragen Sphere (https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ww25HAL9Tgi03VjeBuiuQ2SfwbgISR9umYMa3k7icGw/edit) (with additional deta... |
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General Setting Discussion
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10-21-2024, 04:00 PM |
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Thread: Crystallographer's Nightmare
Post: RE: Crystallographer's Nightmare
An intriguingly alien biology and culture, and a fun history too! I really like the sort of story of cultural influences here- the way the provolution of course produced a mentality compatible with th... |
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10-21-2024, 06:46 AM |
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Thread: Rihal Ri-write/Expansion
Post: RE: Rihal Ri-write/Expansion
Interesting article! I'm inclined to think that a further elaboration on the history would be beneficial- as it stands, it feels like the system was inhabited and then largely stayed the same for a ve... |
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10-20-2024, 07:02 AM |
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Thread: Rewrite: Milky Way
Post: RE: Rewrite: Milky Way
stevebowers Wrote: (10-19-2024, 02:28 AM)
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the high extinction around the galactic core means there's probably still a Zone of Avoidance that obscures what's directly behind it at least... |
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10-19-2024, 09:27 AM |
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Thread: Does anyone have any specific plans for NGC 7789?
Post: RE: Does anyone have any specific plans for NGC 77...
Worldtree Wrote: (10-19-2024, 05:20 AM)
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NGC 1513-
If the article is a stub, or less than a few paragraphs, you can probably rewrite that location to whatever you want.
Also, theoretically,... |
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General Setting Discussion
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10-19-2024, 06:31 AM |