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    Thread: The Vacation
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Matterplay1 Wrote: (08-02-2022, 02:04 PM) -- Agreed, any cooking (or farming, or fishing, or anything else food related) would be an optional activity for typical human residents in the OA present-da...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 02:23 PM
    Thread: The Vacation
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Good point, now aside from that, someone gave me a suggestion for my story. That suggestion being Alex taking Riley out for a ride.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 11:13 AM
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Now that gives me the idea of Riley doing something like fishing for the first time.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 09:24 AM
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Hmmm...makes sense, I'll go with that.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 09:16 AM
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This give me an idea of how my character can go about cooking. So like, she can use a bioforge to create some artificial meat and use a solar cooker to cook the artificial meat.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 07:06 AM
    Thread: The Vacation
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Aside from that, how is cooking done in Orion's Arm?
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 06:51 AM
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Rynn Wrote: (08-02-2022, 02:53 AM) -- Arrittrobi Wrote: (08-02-2022, 01:51 AM) -- I watched this video by Issac Arthur to get an idea of what farming in the Orion's Arm setting is like. https://y...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 03:15 AM
    Thread: The Vacation
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I watched this video by Issac Arthur to get an idea of what farming in the Orion's Arm setting is like. https://youtu.be/OzVxdmC8c-g
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-02-2022, 01:51 AM
    Thread: The Vacation
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Here's the doc of what I written so far. Thoughts? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_1rDNqeBWWI5bcsX9a0PPFExK67AmAW0be73-FbbkaE/edit?usp=sharing
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 08-01-2022, 08:01 AM
    Thread: The Vacation
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This just gives me a good idea.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-25-2022, 11:34 AM
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What would Alex use instead of a 21st century AD midrange speaker?
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-25-2022, 09:57 AM
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Drashner1 Wrote: (07-24-2022, 12:30 AM) -- Suggested wordsmithing below in the body of the text.. Arrittrobi Wrote: (07-23-2022, 02:18 PM) -- Here's what I got now: When I entered it, I sa...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-24-2022, 12:40 AM
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Here's what I got now: When I entered it, I saw that appliances like the refrigerator and microwave had smooth yet organic designs that made them appear as though they were a part of the cabin'...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 02:18 PM
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You know what? You make a good point there sir.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 01:58 PM
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (07-23-2022, 01:42 PM) -- Well after the ..very long discussions we had about Qratza , several months ago… personally I’ll wait and see if that’s a good idea. As long as you’re w...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 01:51 PM
    Thread: The Vacation
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Anyways, I'm thinking about introducing my Qratza character in my story.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 11:37 AM
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Thanks for that heads up Todd.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 11:36 AM
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Vitto Wrote: (07-23-2022, 08:39 AM) -- Quote: -- vehvec -- A... what? :huh: Vehicle vec? To me it sounds as a weird definition IMHO. Quote: -- Arrittrobi Wrote: Wrote: -- I quickly ...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 08:45 AM
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Although, I'm also getting feedback from people outside of the forums.
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-23-2022, 02:05 AM
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Drashner1 Wrote: (07-22-2022, 01:20 PM) -- Various thoughts and comments below... On a general note, you jump between past and present tense a lot, sometimes in the same sentence. Generally speaki...
Arrittrobi Creative Writing 40 506 07-22-2022, 01:22 PM