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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Matterplay1 Wrote: (08-02-2022, 02:04 PM)
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Agreed, any cooking (or farming, or fishing, or anything else food related) would be an optional activity for typical human residents in the OA present-da... |
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08-02-2022, 02:23 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Good point, now aside from that, someone gave me a suggestion for my story. That suggestion being Alex taking Riley out for a ride. |
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08-02-2022, 11:13 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Now that gives me the idea of Riley doing something like fishing for the first time. |
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08-02-2022, 09:24 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Hmmm...makes sense, I'll go with that. |
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08-02-2022, 09:16 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| This give me an idea of how my character can go about cooking. So like, she can use a bioforge to create some artificial meat and use a solar cooker to cook the artificial meat. |
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08-02-2022, 07:06 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Aside from that, how is cooking done in Orion's Arm? |
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08-02-2022, 06:51 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Rynn Wrote: (08-02-2022, 02:53 AM)
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Arrittrobi Wrote: (08-02-2022, 01:51 AM)
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I watched this video by Issac Arthur to get an idea of what farming in the Orion's Arm setting is like.
https://y... |
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08-02-2022, 03:15 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| I watched this video by Issac Arthur to get an idea of what farming in the Orion's Arm setting is like.
https://youtu.be/OzVxdmC8c-g |
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08-02-2022, 01:51 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Here's the doc of what I written so far. Thoughts?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_1rDNqeBWWI5bcsX9a0PPFExK67AmAW0be73-FbbkaE/edit?usp=sharing |
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08-01-2022, 08:01 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| This just gives me a good idea. |
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07-25-2022, 11:34 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| What would Alex use instead of a 21st century AD midrange speaker? |
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07-25-2022, 09:57 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Drashner1 Wrote: (07-24-2022, 12:30 AM)
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Suggested wordsmithing below in the body of the text..
Arrittrobi Wrote: (07-23-2022, 02:18 PM)
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Here's what I got now:
When I entered it, I sa... |
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07-24-2022, 12:40 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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When I entered it, I saw that appliances like the refrigerator and microwave had smooth yet organic designs that made them appear as though they were a part of the cabin'... |
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07-23-2022, 02:18 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| You know what? You make a good point there sir. |
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07-23-2022, 01:58 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (07-23-2022, 01:42 PM)
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Well after the ..very long discussions we had about Qratza , several months ago… personally I’ll wait and see if that’s a good idea. As long as you’re w... |
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07-23-2022, 01:51 PM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Anyways, I'm thinking about introducing my Qratza character in my story. |
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07-23-2022, 11:37 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Thanks for that heads up Todd. |
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07-23-2022, 11:36 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Vitto Wrote: (07-23-2022, 08:39 AM)
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A... what? :huh:
Vehicle vec?
To me it sounds as a weird definition IMHO.
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07-23-2022, 08:45 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
| Although, I'm also getting feedback from people outside of the forums. |
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07-23-2022, 02:05 AM |
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Thread: The Vacation
Post: RE: The Vacation
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Drashner1 Wrote: (07-22-2022, 01:20 PM)
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Various thoughts and comments below...
On a general note, you jump between past and present tense a lot, sometimes in the same sentence. Generally speaki... |
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07-22-2022, 01:22 PM |
