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    Thread: Octopus Sophont Image
Post: RE: Octopus Sophont Image

Are they in water or any form of liquid? Where are they, try to craft a story for the picture.
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 19 168 10-25-2025, 09:42 AM
    Thread: Nanomachine diagram
Post: RE: Nanomachine diagram

Very nice, maybe an extra detail could be date of manufacture and makers of the nanomachines. It is always nice to see a timeline of how things change through time.
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 17 254 09-25-2025, 07:53 PM
    Thread: Expanse-style OA intro
Post: RE: Expanse-style OA intro

Needs to be slowed down a bit to show the planets and details . Interesting idea.
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 22 216 08-09-2025, 11:31 AM
    Thread: Comic One-shots
Post: RE: Comic One-shots

I think the general concept is interesting, but having the mom being the limiting factor to whether the girl grows up or not is a tad severe.  Like I feel like the mother would get pressured into mak...
Clockwork Creative Writing 6 65 07-17-2025, 07:53 PM
    Thread: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture
Post: RE: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture

The Springs of Nagare: The many springs of Nagare serve as major locations for relaxation, meditation, sport and even residential areas. Shown in this depiction, is a spring made by the architecture c...
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 8 154 06-01-2025, 09:56 PM
    Thread: Removal: Baseline Hyperdependency Syndrome
Post: RE: Removal: Baseline Hyperdependency Syndrome

When we look at outdated articles I think we should look at the following: 1. Is it interesting? 2. Is it limiting to creators? 3. How easy is it to retool? I find this article hitting "no" f...
Clockwork Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 21 281 03-23-2025, 03:10 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Name: Kazu Gender:Male age:120 -Everlasting Reverse ascendancy b3 Reverse ascendancy b3 physical appearance: tan brown skin, with brown mid shortish hair, Greek muscular appearance, body slight...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 02-26-2025, 10:57 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Hello again, I have added a lot more detail for Jeannette and Kazu. I believe I have added a good amount of detail regarding the two characters. I hope to hear your feedback. With the feedback I ...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 02-26-2025, 10:56 PM
    Thread: OA Tshirt designs
Post: RE: OA Tshirt designs

The front designs are good, but I find the back designs to be too much. There is just so much, it is not pleasing to the eye. Especially with the pictures being cut off. Instead, maybe have a Sephir...
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 42 614 02-14-2025, 06:54 PM
    Thread: OA Tshirt designs
Post: RE: OA Tshirt designs

Negentropy shirts when? Also, all the tiny images are kinda hard to see and of course what steve said about the source of Bernd's lovely pictures. I do not think there should be back designs. I...
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 42 614 02-10-2025, 08:40 PM
    Thread: Quokka From The Future
Post: RE: Quokka From The Future

You Quokka family looks very cute, I especially like the background with the tv and the people outside. As a fellow artist, I believe that you will be able to make an even better version with some mor...
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 11 153 01-15-2025, 08:19 PM
    Thread: Suited Up To'ul'h
Post: RE: Suited Up To'ul'h

How does the suit interface with the webbing part. That is a good place to customize.
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 5 78 01-15-2025, 08:13 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Worldtree Wrote: (12-07-2024, 03:20 AM) -- So, obviously it’s totally fine to write an extended scene where a handsome Greek-looking man teaches the protagonist/you to swim on a tropical beach but al...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 12-15-2024, 10:33 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Ok, now it is Kazu's time!!! Kazu’s clade body type: Reverse ascendancy b3 This body type may be visually characterized as a Greeco type, but the construction of the bodytype Kazu uses ...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 12-15-2024, 09:51 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Here is what I have written about Jeannette and Kazu. I go into further details about themselves, their clade, body type and cultures. I will try to answer most of your questions as well. I will be go...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 12-15-2024, 09:36 PM
    Thread: Metropolis Ring City - Space View Proposal
Post: RE: Metropolis Ring City - Space View Proposal

Looks good, maybe have two accompanying objects next to each other. The Spacesuit guys stand out a tad much.
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 10 178 12-15-2024, 12:32 PM
    Thread: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise world
Post: RE: At my finger tips - Story set in a paradise wo...

Ok sorry for the wait here is the corrected draft, I will explain some details at the bottom regarding characters. The dome I stood in was in a fragmented darkness, the few lights that were ther...
Clockwork Creative Writing 17 214 12-06-2024, 11:04 PM
    Thread: november updates
Post: RE: november updates

Feels great to finally get something published. I like the article about the mars calendar, hoping we get some more stuff like that in the future.
Clockwork The latest from Orion's Arm 11 8,678 12-04-2024, 08:42 PM
    Thread: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture
Post: RE: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture

Oh awesome! That was fast. I will try to deepen their backstory a bit. Thanks a bunch!
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 8 154 11-19-2024, 04:51 PM
    Thread: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture
Post: RE: Cyborg provolve owl pastel picture

Sorry for the long wait, lots of things have happened since I have drawn the owl. I finally got it scanned. And here it is. Well it could be used for the avivecs article, however I always imagined t...
Clockwork Art and Visual Media 8 154 11-16-2024, 04:31 PM