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    Thread: Character Profile: Ferria
Post: RE: Character Profile: Ferria

MrOnyx Wrote: (Today, 09:17 AM) -- Thank you for pointing this out. I didn't know that grapeships were considered "ancient" tech; I thought it was just one of the myriad of designs a spacecraft can h...
Drashner1 Creative Writing 152 2,070 Less than 1 minute ago
    Thread: Character Profile: Ferria
Post: RE: Character Profile: Ferria

MrOnyx Wrote: (06-24-2022, 09:46 AM) -- "The reaction to this news was more or less received the same way the initial corruption of the ring was: extreme distress and sadness. Several people took the...
Drashner1 Creative Writing 152 2,070 Yesterday, 01:47 PM
    Thread: Information Storage
Post: RE: Information Storage

JohnnyYesterday Wrote: (Yesterday, 09:25 AM) -- This text should work in the footnotes, note number after “suitably patterned” in the first paragraph.  Theoretical maximum storage capacity of high...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 40 574 Yesterday, 12:37 PM
    Thread: Tohul Geological History ready for editing
Post: RE: Tohul Geological History ready for editing

A fresh draft of the article should be posted to this thread that incorporates whatever changes have shaken out of the most recent discussion. That will also allow for a review of the draft and feedba...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 32 362 Yesterday, 12:59 AM
    Thread: Character Profile: Ferria
Post: RE: Character Profile: Ferria

Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (06-09-2022, 08:31 AM) -- Nice! I like it! “when the ship's gravitational wave detectors went haywire. “ you can probably just say “sensors” here to keep it vague ? Not sure ...
Drashner1 Creative Writing 152 2,070 06-28-2022, 11:33 PM
    Thread: Character Profile: Ferria
Post: RE: Character Profile: Ferria

MrOnyx Wrote: (06-09-2022, 07:10 AM) -- [hr] "I didn't sleep for the length of the trip to Equaphon's craft, the Koyaanisqatsi, a grapeship equipped with an external fission propulsion system. He st...
Drashner1 Creative Writing 152 2,070 06-28-2022, 11:30 PM
    Thread: Topic Update - Groupminds
Post: RE: Topic Update - Groupminds

echammond Wrote: (06-28-2022, 08:47 PM) -- I'm working on a full reply post to all the previous comments today. But I just wanted to say (a) a quick thanks to anyone whose already given feedback ...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 14 156 06-28-2022, 11:19 PM
    Thread: Topic Update - Groupminds
Post: RE: Topic Update - Groupminds

Late enough here I don't think I have time to give this a full read thru tonight. But expecting a bit more time in the AM and hopefully can read and provide more feedback then. For now - and speaki...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 14 156 06-28-2022, 12:14 PM
    Thread: Snapshot: Uchuu-senshi
Post: RE: Snapshot: Uchuu-senshi

Nice story. :) To add to what has been said already - the story is currently written in a mix of third person past tense and either first or second person present tense, sometimes switching in mid-...
Drashner1 Creative Writing 8 51 06-28-2022, 12:03 PM
    Thread: Drew another bot
Post: RE: Drew another bot

Very nice! :) Note that if this bot is made of smart matter it could temporarily absorb and use a variety of dedicated tools of various sorts and then extrude them again to be put in storage when d...
Drashner1 Art and Visual Media 7 78 06-28-2022, 10:59 AM
    Thread: Ideology and history of the Red Star 'M'pire and Farview
Post: RE: Ideology and history of the Red Star 'M'pire a...

Immanuelle Wrote: (06-27-2022, 09:26 PM) -- I have been working on my abandoned ideas and I think the Tohul geological history one is going to get through, although with some modifications because th...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 8 55 06-27-2022, 10:57 PM
    Thread: I did a quick sketch of Discord memeber's idea
Post: RE: I did a quick sketch of Discord memeber's idea

Rynn Wrote: (06-26-2022, 07:57 AM) -- JohnnyYesterday Wrote: (06-26-2022, 07:38 AM) -- Mostly, it looks great. My one criticism is that the circuit lines on the skin don’t make technological sense; ...
Drashner1 Art and Visual Media 12 85 06-26-2022, 09:07 AM
    Thread: The "Once And For All"
Post: RE: The "Once And For All"

Vitto Wrote: (06-21-2022, 11:24 PM) -- Numbers checks out for me. I was thinking to add a paragraph to describe that due to the apparent redshifting and blueshifting of the objects that compound the ...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 72 993 06-25-2022, 10:06 PM
    Thread: I did a quick sketch of Discord memeber's idea
Post: RE: I did a quick sketch of Discord memeber's idea

Dfleymmes1134 Wrote: (06-25-2022, 10:31 AM) -- Nice  !! This definitely belongs somewhere Possibly even, say, as a neogen or vec used on *modern* y11k To’ul’h , which emulates the appearance of th...
Drashner1 Art and Visual Media 12 85 06-25-2022, 10:50 AM
    Thread: Ahumans, Snapshot and possible update
Post: RE: Ahumans, Snapshot and possible update

I don't have time to look at all of this point by point, but an initial skim gives me the sense that you're just making a lot (most?) of this up without much regard for what the current articles say. ...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 32 444 06-25-2022, 02:59 AM
    Thread: Ahuman AI history
Post: RE: Ahuman AI history

Immanuelle Wrote: (06-24-2022, 12:30 AM) -- Rynn Wrote: (02-29-2020, 09:43 PM) -- Recently I started an update on the abuman empires, particularly to address canon inconsistencies in their philosoph...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 4 93 06-25-2022, 02:41 AM
    Thread: Proto-Anglic
Post: RE: Proto-Anglic

Immanuelle Wrote: (06-25-2022, 12:01 AM) -- Do we have any established Anglic words aside from Zar that I could do sound shifts on? I think a dropping of the th-sound would likely happen also with it...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 7 48 06-25-2022, 01:52 AM
    Thread: Proto-Anglic
Post: RE: Proto-Anglic

Immanuelle Wrote: (06-24-2022, 12:20 AM) -- I like the idea of the EU becoming a superpower making Euro English (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Euro_English) become the basis for Proto-Anglic. It has ...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 7 48 06-24-2022, 11:36 PM
    Thread: To'uh'l history
Post: RE: To'uh'l history

Looking back up this thread - Why are Earth place and culture names being used for maps of Tohul? Those aren't going to work as written. We are fine with having place names for Tohul - but they nee...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 15 183 06-24-2022, 11:34 PM
    Thread: Ahumans, Snapshot and possible update
Post: RE: Ahumans, Snapshot and possible update

Immanuelle Wrote: (06-24-2022, 12:37 AM) -- Yes I agree with this. Was bot marxism an earlier part of the setting from the early 2000s over later additions that had better established canon? I'm m...
Drashner1 Encyclopaedia Galactica Articles 32 444 06-24-2022, 11:26 PM