Proof-reading EG

[Matterplay1]

The article on nanobots has a minor typo:

[..]have an internal power source can access external power such as light such as light or chemical fuels[..]

Fixed. Thanks!

[PortalHunter]

AreanTundral worlds

Stellar proximity(!) typically leaves these worlds quite frigid.

[stevebowers]

I think that John means 'the distance between the star and the planet'; proximity is not exactly wrong, but it is misleading. Fixed.

[chris0033547]

There's a repeat of words in the following article:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d995c13c9e

[..]highly dense materials such as such as magmatter[..]

Should the following be fixed as well?

[..]evolve towards an Omega Point[..]

[stevebowers]

Fixed and fixed. Thanks.

[chris0033547]

The following article contains a repetition of words:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a140a5766bf7

[..]and generally is generally running at least 100 classes on various subjects every day.

A small typo:

The facility is maintained by subsapient vecs commonly known at "the staff".

[stevebowers]

Fixed - thanks.

[PortalHunter]

First Federation of Hu and AI, The

The assimilation of the countless millions descended from human refugees that in the Great Expulsion — some inhabiting the hulks of the old O'Neill orbitals, others in biospheres scattered throughout the solar system &mdash caused serious problems for the Federation.

[stevebowers]

Fixed - That's the dreaded encoding bug, usually caused by copy-and-paste from Microsoft Word.

[Rynn]

From the triangulum transmission page

While day-to-day decisions are made by the soophonts themselves