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(09-03-2016, 01:59 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e788b49c77e
Alexandria II Bibliotech project

hierarchy of semi-turning AIs
should be
hierarchy of semi-turing AIs

the various semi-turning daemon clades
should be
the various semi-turing daemon clades

Fixed
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(09-03-2016, 01:59 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e788b49c77e
Alexandria II Bibliotech project

hierarchy of semi-turning AIs
should be
hierarchy of semi-turing AIs

the various semi-turning daemon clades
should be
the various semi-turing daemon clades

Fixed a couple of other issues, but someone else (Todd?) fixed the issues you mention.
Stephen
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(09-06-2016, 10:52 AM)Drashner1 Wrote:
(09-03-2016, 01:59 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e788b49c77e
Alexandria II Bibliotech project

hierarchy of semi-turning AIs
should be
hierarchy of semi-turing AIs

the various semi-turning daemon clades
should be
the various semi-turing daemon clades

Fixed

Ah, we're in the editing system at the same time I see.
Stephen
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(09-02-2016, 09:36 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a13ee2483366
Wormhole Termini

Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated/slaved transapient AI system
probably should be replaced by something like
Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated non-conscious transapient AI system

Changed as suggested.
Stephen
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(09-02-2016, 10:10 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4fe926ed8ac05
Evanescence

many disappearances of Terragen factions
should be
many disappearances on Terragen factions

Fixed
Stephen
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(09-03-2016, 12:06 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464b88ed2c319
Ferjik, Ken

culminating in the political-educational simulation Cuba (2096).
should be
culminating in the political-educational simulation Cuba (127).

Fixed
Stephen
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(09-03-2016, 12:25 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e7873ca8b42
Alexandria (Tichy 44-III)

the total capacity of the entire system is around 1036 bits,
should be
the total capacity of the entire system is around 10^36 bits,
or
the total capacity of the entire system is around 10[sup]36[/sup] bits,

Well, apparently not the latter, unless the bbcode interpreter can be enhanced.

Went with 10^36 bits. Perhaps that number should be further revised, but it sure isn't 1036.
Stephen
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(09-02-2016, 09:36 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a13ee2483366
Wormhole Termini

Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated/slaved transapient AI system
probably should be replaced by something like
Some wormholes are controlled by a dedicated non-conscious transapient AI system

Fixed
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(08-31-2016, 09:38 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-p...netiquette

is another page containing many black-diamond-question-marks. Unfortunately, many of them obviously aren't replacements for apostrophes and some of them are critical to the meaning of the text. For example, it isn't obvious what symbol was intended for "replace it with [�] to indicate that a section has been removed." An ellipsis, perhaps?

eta:
Some more pages with lots of bdqms are
http://www.orionsarm.com/page/504
Dirty Hands - Pt 1 of 3
http://www.orionsarm.com/page/517
Dirty Hands - Pt 2 of 3
http://www.orionsarm.com/page/547
Dirty Hands - Pt 3 of 3

I started working on fixing this, but apparently the CMS timed out while I was stepped away. Angry

Anyway - will work on fixing this.

Thanks!

Todd
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(08-31-2016, 04:07 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48fdb8829e239
Version War, The

[...]

Fixed.
Stephen
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