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(03-20-2017, 08:30 AM)Avengium Wrote: @matterplay , what do you think of merging pseudoclarktech into clarktech?

My own preference is to go with separate articles, so that there are two different ways that a reader might encounter the material. However if someone wants to do up a rewrite of the clarketech article that mentions pseudoclarketech I'm all for it.
Stephen
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(03-20-2017, 12:31 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- Siberoos

In the decades following the formation of the Free States, Antarctican culture blossomed. The prevailing ideology of the continent became the exploration of the novel, rejecting much of the national and corporate culture pervading Old Earth at the time. Few of the Free States retained strong cultural ties to their founding nations and corps. Easy immigration both to and between the States encouraged a cosmopolitan living, this continental melting pot attracted many disaffected groups from across the globe such as the early vec clades and the Siberoos

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c1db78cddd50

Fixed.
Stephen
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(03-20-2017, 12:33 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- Chilean

The mid-22nd century saw the rise of Antarctic literature (also known as "Antarcticana"); some of the best known examples of early Antarcticana include epics such as Sun Lingyu's "Cold Desert" (2164) and Adil Khan's "United" (2167). Although popular amongst those living on the continent, Antarctic literature was not well-received by foreign critics, who dismissed as "comically arrogant", claiming that it "painted all outsiders as bitter racists", while presenting a highly romanticized Antarctica where people of all ethnicities come to live in peace (which was not necessarily true). This idealized version of Antarctica was also featured in much of the native music, and in 2169, an unofficial "Antarctic Anthem" was selected by the inhabitants of the First Chilaen colony ("Untarnished Land"), and an unofficial flag was selected just a few months later.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c1db78cddd50

Also fixed.
Stephen
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(03-20-2017, 12:57 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Interplanetary age link goes to old Sundering article instead.

In standard designs, automatic nanotech systems maintain a bubblehab and scavenge the atmosphere for building and maintenance materials. The hab itself is an artificial organism; it has at least the kind of vegetative awareness of a plant or a plantbot, but even the earlier models could be sentient or sapient, and some are even transapient. The first Interplanetary Age bubblehabs were manufactured by sophonts and their bots, but by the dawn of the Nanotech Age designs arose that were neumann-capable, and could grow and reproduce the way most modern bubblehabs do.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4f181b2caeccf

The current page it goes to.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/567786026095b

Fixed. Thanks!
Stephen
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(03-20-2017, 01:34 PM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Broken link- S4 Archailects

Nieuw Amsterdam - 20,000,000,000 
Staten - 1,000,000,000
Several hundred million elsewhere
40+ S4 archailects


http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/552cf42ae3c54

Fixed.
Stephen
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d9a409a10b
S-Brain, Godstar

popularly known as known as a Godstar
should be
popularly known as a Godstar

It is not know to what toposophic level
should be
It is not known to what toposophic level


the archai based upon them either willingly expire
should be either
the archai based upon them are willing to expire
or
the archai based upon them will willingly expire
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491aecf1478f9
Enigma Cluster, The (NGC 6755)

several hundred relativist expeditions have arrived
should be
several hundred relativistic expeditions have arrived

resist relativist travel within the cluster
should be
resist relativistic travel within the cluster
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/50bfb35472f7b
Da'at disaster, The

this ascension to had been a failure
should be
this ascension had been a failure
Selden
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(03-21-2017, 08:25 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491aecf1478f9
Enigma Cluster, The (NGC 6755)

several hundred relativist expeditions have arrived
should be
several hundred relativistic expeditions have arrived

resist relativist travel within the cluster
should be
resist relativistic travel within the cluster

I think this refers to 'relativists'
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/519d9d29e4531
although the term 'relativistic' would work just as well, and is more general.
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48474892bdb15
W-Brain, Distributed Wormhole Brain

There's spurious line break in the middle of list element 2) between "is" and "guaranteed"
Selden
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