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#769. #770.
Also: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462da1b6b4eab TopoGo

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Metasoft Version Tree, Zoeific Biopolity, wormhole networks, KnownNet.
Maybe the era: 7800 to 9999 AT: Age of Expansionist New Empires.
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The previous posts need revision. Also:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/46212d6e18aa1 Efficiency Maximization Paradigm

The article need section titles.

Also need hyperlinks in the text. (For example): early Fragmentation (post-ComEmp) period, Precepts of Negentropy, memeticists, obscionists, Heinlim Intercessor clade of cyborg superbrights on Habitat Ashton, Morpheo A II named Paz, anti-Gabriaelist breakaway faction of the Universalist Church, called The True Universal Church, founded by Broderik Paz, YarrMakist, the Axioms, rim-ward Crucis Corridor region , Negentropist-NoCoZo-Utopia-NoCoNeg , Habitat Asmof , Second Federation Period, Version War, Standardizationist Clade Borup , Wormhole link, Cyberian Network , superbright clades, including the Malovitches , Vakt Ecohabitat, Disarchy worlds , Zua Ban vPuthr, or First Avatar vPuthr , Keterist , Linguistic Monitor clerk 3rd Class , Aleph Absolute , Singularity , Merriam Language Surveillance Datapolls , nanoreplicators , Morpheo - Dashwood wormhole , the Council of Interstellar Powers (the successor to the old ComEmp), Daveth tweaks, the NoCoNeg situation, the re-emergence of Geminga orthodoxy, Oshi-Durtam Web disaster, Orion Federation , Dyson spheres , "The Wilds", as the region outside the reach of the Civilised Galaxy was now termed, first Federation, later Imperial period and after - the Dominion, Metasoft, Keter, etc. , In 5465 the Paradigm Containment Organisation , Utopia Sphere worlds, the Dominion, the Negentropy Alliance, the Mutual Progress Association, the Sophic League, and Metasoft. , Second Consolidation War, ISO , the Galactic Heritage Preservation Act (which forbids rampant destruction or modification of pristine solar systems); bionts , aioids , computronium , ai-viruses , linelayer, The Seat of Judgement , Jekaumeatrine Accords 5559 , Godtech , transapientech, Kalyptic , Universalist, Omegist, Chaoticist, Eschatologist , Amalgamation , Biovirate , .

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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cd3dcc18626 Orion Federation

The article need a larger datapanel. Ruling toposophic: Enremdeaorion.

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: ComEmp, Christmas Tree Cluster , Enremdeaorion , Eden AI symbiosis solution , Wormhole Nexus , ComEmp Ontology , Saint Warwick Rebellion , Objector Alliance ,
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#769, #770, #771, #772, #773, also this:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cfd475c5b95 Transcend, The

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: transapients, Third Singularity, bionts, vecs, turingrade ais , Panvirtuality, Diamond Network, Objectivists, and TRHN, S:1 , Tragadi Accords , Amalgamation , Hyperutilization Supremacy, Efficiency Maximization Paradigm , ISO , Keter, Known Net , transapientech , godtech,
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48bc8685b8223 Far Edge Civilisation, The

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Cyborg, Academion, Tau Ceti , Unity, Unityware, computronium , [First] federation , Diamond Belt , godseed , Fourth Toposophic , transapient-tech , Consolidation Wars , [Solar] Dominion , Metasoft , Version War , Caretaker God , Empaths , memetic engineering.

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(06-25-2017, 09:36 PM)Avengium Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48225fe6e67ad
Hazard Rating

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2ad0f11181
9999 AT to Present: (Current Era)

Another article to add links:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480a4f64762fd The Chaos

The articles listed in post #769 have been updated.

The population of Venus information can be revised once a final population is settled on for that world.

I agree that parts of the Current Era article don't really fit with our encyclopedia style, but don't have time to rewrite the article just now. Maybe someone else would like to take a shot at this?

Thanks!

Todd
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(07-04-2017, 04:16 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2ad0f11181
9999 AT to Present: (Current Era)

I agree that parts of the Current Era article don't really fit with our encyclopedia style, but don't have time to rewrite the article just now. Maybe someone else would like to take a shot at this?

Thanks!

Todd

My attempt at rewriting that section:

The Current Era is one in which there has never been such stability at home and yet, paradoxically, such instability. The old Inner Sphere archailects still rule over all as Olympian deities with nodes of computronium, reigning over countless different cultures and clades. But some of the sophonts of the Inner Sphere are worried that in the process of reorganizing and assimilating larger stretches of newly claimed space, and coming to terms with an increasing number of new emerging Archailects, Ascends, and Transcends in the Outer Volumes and along the Periphery, the Sephirotic archailects may reorganize things and do some fancy ascensions or transcensions that might just absorb ordinary sophonts as a side-effect. Most believe that they wouldn't do any such thing, but they certainly could if they wished to.

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This is a growing period of uncertainty. The Emple-dokcetics emerge as a major culture/House/empire, along the lines of Metasoft. Metasoft is already starting to decline because their standard is starting to fall out of favour. Cygexba is no longer an empire and the STC (Sagittarius Transcultural Cooperation) is being threatened by the new emerging polities on the Periphery. The Paradigm might be brewing some "offspring expansion spheres" in the periphery, the Amalgamation is awaiting to launch the next assault, scheming. The NoCoZo is analizing the situation with an eye on the profit , while, Keter is not interested in much of these conflicts (apparently). A few sporadic Daharrans are still managing to let loose fanatics with system-wrecking weaponry, Jean Te Uahlg Aestheticism might be the next big thing and the Caretaker Gods have begun to get irritated over the number of exploding/imploding stars, ecologies converted to nanostuff and the general messiness of things.

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This is an attempt to try to correct in 9999 to Present Era.
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Communion of worlds EG article. http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbc752f41f8

We could made the line symbol more complete including: "The original symbol is actually a flower pattern made out of the silhouettes of human heads.".
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(06-28-2017, 09:18 AM)Avengium Wrote: This article need links too: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4650fa4677e07 Free Sophic Polities

Links to: Minds (with caps) , NoCoZo - Sophic League , ComEmp and Re-Evaluation periods , Cyborg , Fast Meditation Orbital Chain , Hyperutilization Supremacy.

Fixed.

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(07-01-2017, 10:17 PM)Avengium Wrote: #769. #770.
Also: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462da1b6b4eab TopoGo

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Metasoft Version Tree, Zoeific Biopolity, wormhole networks, KnownNet.
Maybe the era: 7800 to 9999 AT: Age of Expansionist New Empires.

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Todd
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