Overall, I like it! I agree with Rynn’s comments above and here are a few additional ones...
1) I’m almost always a fan of proper nouns in EG articles so I think it’s a good idea if we sprinkle in some specific megacorps names, industries, dates, locations, etc.
2) Because this is such a murky topic in OA I think we need a good definition for megacorps at the start of the article. It should mention that what’s considered a megacorps and their function has changed over time but still defines the term and frames the article for the reader.
3) We should mention how the megacorps contributed to the general erosion of authority of earth based nation states during this period.
4) A mention that skirmishes between the megacorps and with other groups in the outer system was not uncommon would be a nice touch.
1) I’m almost always a fan of proper nouns in EG articles so I think it’s a good idea if we sprinkle in some specific megacorps names, industries, dates, locations, etc.
2) Because this is such a murky topic in OA I think we need a good definition for megacorps at the start of the article. It should mention that what’s considered a megacorps and their function has changed over time but still defines the term and frames the article for the reader.
3) We should mention how the megacorps contributed to the general erosion of authority of earth based nation states during this period.
4) A mention that skirmishes between the megacorps and with other groups in the outer system was not uncommon would be a nice touch.