01-29-2015, 11:23 AM
(04-13-2014, 02:02 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: Biology/paleontology is not my area of expertise, but this seems simple enough to correct and make more robust in the process. Perhaps change the sentence to read:
"Early on, e had developed a technique of augmenting the modest dinosaurian brain into an organ capable of supporting a fully sophont mind through the use of generous wetware and symbiotic neurobionanotech..."
OR, if we wanted to change it up a bit more...
"Early on, e had developed a technique using generous wetware and symbiotic neurobionanotech to augment the modest dinosaurian brain into an organ capable of supporting a fully sophont mind..."
Or something like that.
Will give this some time for others to weigh in and then update the EG accordingly.
Thanks for catching this!
Todd
This has now been fixed, btw.
Todd