08-14-2016, 10:26 PM
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-f...Criticisms
"the sapient level of intelligence just like you and I."
would be better as
"the same sapient level of intelligence as you and I."
On that same page there are quite a few places where it seems that somebody's word processor inserted non-translatable "smart quotes".
different from Orion’s Arm in detail
should be
different from Orion's Arm in detail"
Wouldn’t that be an interesting
should be
Wouldn't that be an interesting
(known as “vecs†after the AI
should be
(known as "Moravecs" or "vecs" after the AI
just “bigger and better†humans
should be
just "bigger and better" humans
E.E “Doc†Smith,
should be
E.E "Doc" Smith,
"the sapient level of intelligence just like you and I."
would be better as
"the same sapient level of intelligence as you and I."
On that same page there are quite a few places where it seems that somebody's word processor inserted non-translatable "smart quotes".
different from Orion’s Arm in detail
should be
different from Orion's Arm in detail"
Wouldn’t that be an interesting
should be
Wouldn't that be an interesting
(known as “vecs†after the AI
should be
(known as "Moravecs" or "vecs" after the AI
just “bigger and better†humans
should be
just "bigger and better" humans
E.E “Doc†Smith,
should be
E.E "Doc" Smith,
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