Proof-reading EG

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Dedicated Hyperturing


be used to attack other a transapient directly
should be
be used to attack another transapient directly

is a distraction for the task at hand
should be
is a distraction from the task at hand

These freed d.h's generally
should be
These freed DH generally

freelance d.h. are in high demand.
should be
freelance DH are in high demand.

(the latter two primarily for consistency with the abbreviation used elsewhere in the article.)