09-03-2016, 01:29 AM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/487e62ce90624
SNARE (Siris Nanocyborg Ascension RegimEn)
for low-singularity (S1 to S3) ascensions
probably should be
for low-singularity (S1 to almost S3) ascensions
(My understanding is that full S3 requires the mass of a moon to support, so seems unlikely to be appropriate when maintaining an external humanoid shape as the article seems to suggest. Near the end it also says "someone with the SNARE package can jump from SI:0.8 to SI:2.99 in a few seconds" suggesting that a full S3 ascension is unlikely.)
the transcended beings who result is biased
should be
the transcended beings who result are biased
further nanocyborgize it's host
should be
further nanocyborgize its host
SNARE (Siris Nanocyborg Ascension RegimEn)
for low-singularity (S1 to S3) ascensions
probably should be
for low-singularity (S1 to almost S3) ascensions
(My understanding is that full S3 requires the mass of a moon to support, so seems unlikely to be appropriate when maintaining an external humanoid shape as the article seems to suggest. Near the end it also says "someone with the SNARE package can jump from SI:0.8 to SI:2.99 in a few seconds" suggesting that a full S3 ascension is unlikely.)
the transcended beings who result is biased
should be
the transcended beings who result are biased
further nanocyborgize it's host
should be
further nanocyborgize its host
Selden