02-11-2017, 10:14 AM
This passage needs a period after "carrying". See bold.
Eventually a medic came in and gave me a mild sedative- I didn’t know this one, just another of the thousands of qualified personnel we were carrying. I made up my mind to ask him his name, but before I could, he addressed me directly in that particular, solemn tone that signals trouble.
http://www.voicesoa.net/the-starlark-part-three/
Eventually a medic came in and gave me a mild sedative- I didn’t know this one, just another of the thousands of qualified personnel we were carrying. I made up my mind to ask him his name, but before I could, he addressed me directly in that particular, solemn tone that signals trouble.
http://www.voicesoa.net/the-starlark-part-three/