Proof-reading EG

[stevebowers]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4b93bfb9d77e1
Biomachine

like the slaved softbots of the Zoeific Biopolity.
probably should be just
like the softbots of the Zoeific Biopolity.

Otherwise, it might be appropriate for there to be an article describing the biological equivalent of a vot. Alternatively, perhaps one about abuses in the Biopolity.

edited - Transapient biological vots are an interesting idea- we should have an article about them. One option is a giant brain, like Stapledon's Fourth Men, that acts as adviser-angel for the modosophont population.