02-20-2017, 02:41 AM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4e26e0f62441a
Transcend Seven
The phrase
consisting of an 21solar mass
would be better as
consisting of a 21 solar mass
The phrase
Except the neutron star
might be better as
Except for the neutron star
or
With the exception of the neutron star
The phrase
orbits the barycenter of the S-Brains in a distance of about 2AU.
would be better as
orbits the barycenter of the S-Brains at a distance of about 2AU.
The phrase
much deeper connections with other empires as previously thought
would be better as
much deeper connections with other empires than previously thought
The phrase
albeit there are exceptions.
would be better as
although there are exceptions.
The phrase
up to hundred S4s and S4+s
would be better as
up to a hundred S4s and S4+s
The phrase
and the binary god-stars being part
would be better as
and the binary god-stars which are part
The phrase
happened before, albeit it is not
would be better as
happened before, although it is not
Paragraph-breaks seem to be missing at
higher than what is visible.
This leads to the conclusion
and
M- and/or J-Nodes.
Alphaline Ascendant,
Transcend Seven
The phrase
consisting of an 21solar mass
would be better as
consisting of a 21 solar mass
The phrase
Except the neutron star
might be better as
Except for the neutron star
or
With the exception of the neutron star
The phrase
orbits the barycenter of the S-Brains in a distance of about 2AU.
would be better as
orbits the barycenter of the S-Brains at a distance of about 2AU.
The phrase
much deeper connections with other empires as previously thought
would be better as
much deeper connections with other empires than previously thought
The phrase
albeit there are exceptions.
would be better as
although there are exceptions.
The phrase
up to hundred S4s and S4+s
would be better as
up to a hundred S4s and S4+s
The phrase
and the binary god-stars being part
would be better as
and the binary god-stars which are part
The phrase
happened before, albeit it is not
would be better as
happened before, although it is not
Paragraph-breaks seem to be missing at
higher than what is visible.
This leads to the conclusion
and
M- and/or J-Nodes.
Alphaline Ascendant,
Selden