http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/539b9e0167be6
Athenaeids
only provides 1 calories of useful energy
should be
only provides 1 calorie of useful energy
While Athenaeids mature into familiar, human-like form,
might be better as either
While Athenaeids mature into the familiar human-like form,
or
While Athenaeids mature into a human-like form,
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana,"
should be
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana II,"
since it links to the article on Fata Morgana II, not the one on Fata Morgana.
Athenaeids
only provides 1 calories of useful energy
should be
only provides 1 calorie of useful energy
While Athenaeids mature into familiar, human-like form,
might be better as either
While Athenaeids mature into the familiar human-like form,
or
While Athenaeids mature into a human-like form,
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana,"
should be
McKendree Cylinder pair known as "Fata Morgana II,"
since it links to the article on Fata Morgana II, not the one on Fata Morgana.
Selden