Proof-reading EG

[stevebowers]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce422da8701 Sagittarius Transcultural Cooperation

Could have more links. For example: Version War , Sagittarius Sphere , hyperturings, Dominion, Negentropist and MPA, Inner Sphere, AI.

Done. I've edited it slightly- the Dominion is presumably the Keter Dominion, rather than the Solar Dominion, and I've added the Sagittarius NoCoZo which seems to have been significant in this region but hasn't been mentioned yet.